My second ship!

Archives for ships and fleets. 'nuff said. Most of the ships here are very very old and will not work in current versions of BSF or SM. You have been warned!

Moderators: th15, Moderators

User avatar
lionm12
Lieutenant
Lieutenant
Posts: 33
Joined: Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:44 pm
Location: Subotica
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by lionm12 »

I made a new ship and its my favorite here it is !
Attachments
SMscreen024.png
User avatar
James510
Lieutenant, Junior Grade
Lieutenant, Junior Grade
Posts: 22
Joined: Thu Aug 06, 2009 2:26 am
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by James510 »

I like the design IMO. The sharp edges highlighted by the purple glow makes it seem like an alien animal of some sort, ready to attack.
Fail
Imaillusion
Captain
Captain
Posts: 355
Joined: Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:57 am
Location: Thin air

Re: My second ship!

Post by Imaillusion »

It's a bit skinny in some areas, might want to add more sections to those places. The light grey sections don't really work with the purple, thay contrast a bit too much. The purple sections/glows themselves aren't too bad though
Those that live by the sword... get shot by those that don't.
User avatar
LactoseTolerant
Captain
Captain
Posts: 413
Joined: Mon Oct 05, 2009 10:00 am
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by LactoseTolerant »

Not bad, the violet/purple outline is good, the overall shape is okay. It seems to be somewhat unfinished, as the back part where the engines would be doesn't seem to be there. Interesting development with the glowy core in the mid-rear of the ship, i'd like to see that worked with some more. The outline is a bit jagged, along with the internal work, but it's still passable. I'd recommend matching up some of the "lines" on the sprites to alleviate this.
Got questions about ShipMaker? Look here!

Life happens.
alive916
Lieutenant
Lieutenant
Posts: 48
Joined: Wed May 19, 2010 6:09 pm

Re: My second ship!

Post by alive916 »

LactoseTolerant said right. violet glow is not too suitable for a grey ship body. I think cyan or light blue are better. They have a plasma, reacting flame feel. For violet glowing, I prefer to use red/blue/light blue ship body.

Secondly, I suggest the side wings of the ship have a feather design, like your third posted ship.
Image
Silver Swordsman
Commander
Commander
Posts: 247
Joined: Sat Jan 31, 2009 1:38 pm
Location: A clustered inhabitance

Re: My second ship!

Post by Silver Swordsman »

I think the shape of the ships are excellent, better than anything I can come up with, but I think coloring can use some change. Just a tad less pink IMO
If admirals hate and trash your ships,
If you can't get it right;
Then off you go, but don't call quits;
Just go make custom sprites.

Solare:
http://www.wyrdysm.com/phpBB3/viewtopic.php?f=2&t=4858
User avatar
lionm12
Lieutenant
Lieutenant
Posts: 33
Joined: Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:44 pm
Location: Subotica
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by lionm12 »

I finaly had some time to create a ship cus in 3 months I'll be in college , here it is !!
Attachments
SMscreen025.png
Imaillusion
Captain
Captain
Posts: 355
Joined: Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:57 am
Location: Thin air

Re: My second ship!

Post by Imaillusion »

I like the colour scheme and the section work, it has this brutal, macabre feel to it. It's kinda menacing in that way

What ruins it, unfortunatly, is the fact that the sections around the centre and back areas are rather bland, by comparison. They just don't have that deathly, imposing feel about them. Fix that, and keep using that style, it's really good
Those that live by the sword... get shot by those that don't.
User avatar
lionm12
Lieutenant
Lieutenant
Posts: 33
Joined: Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:44 pm
Location: Subotica
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by lionm12 »

Yet another one of my ships.
Attachments
SMscreen026.png
jwa8402
Admiral
Admiral
Posts: 1988
Joined: Tue Feb 26, 2008 9:09 am

Re: My second ship!

Post by jwa8402 »

I really do like the second one, not so much the red glares, but we don't get many vertically longer ships like that. I think you could do something really nice with this one.
Imaillusion
Captain
Captain
Posts: 355
Joined: Sat Nov 28, 2009 8:57 am
Location: Thin air

Re: My second ship!

Post by Imaillusion »

To be honest, you should just get rid of the glowy parts at the back or soften them, they contrast way too much. The ship itself is okay, but it doesn't have the same sort of styling as the ship before, which is a real shame, the other one was a lot better
Those that live by the sword... get shot by those that don't.
User avatar
lionm12
Lieutenant
Lieutenant
Posts: 33
Joined: Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:44 pm
Location: Subotica
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by lionm12 »

Muhahaha my latest creation !!!
Attachments
SMscreen028.png
Preacher
Captain
Captain
Posts: 263
Joined: Tue Apr 06, 2010 11:38 pm
Location: somewhere cosy

Re: My second ship!

Post by Preacher »

Dude i think these are inspired! keep making ships like these thay are awesome, kinda remind me of cylon ships from galactica
Image

"I put no stock in religion. By the word religion I have seen the lunacy of fanatics of every denomination be called the will of god. I have seen too much religion in the eyes of too many murderers. Holiness is in right action, and courage on behalf of those who cannot defend themselves, and goodness. " Kingdom of heaven.
User avatar
lionm12
Lieutenant
Lieutenant
Posts: 33
Joined: Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:44 pm
Location: Subotica
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by lionm12 »

I made another ship, my new ships are just rolling in !!
Attachments
SMscreen029.png
User avatar
lionm12
Lieutenant
Lieutenant
Posts: 33
Joined: Sun Mar 07, 2010 4:44 pm
Location: Subotica
Contact:

Re: My second ship!

Post by lionm12 »

I have upgraded my last ship!
Attachments
SMscreen031.png
Locked