My second ship!
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Re: My second ship!
I like the design IMO. The sharp edges highlighted by the purple glow makes it seem like an alien animal of some sort, ready to attack.
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Re: My second ship!
It's a bit skinny in some areas, might want to add more sections to those places. The light grey sections don't really work with the purple, thay contrast a bit too much. The purple sections/glows themselves aren't too bad though
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Re: My second ship!
Not bad, the violet/purple outline is good, the overall shape is okay. It seems to be somewhat unfinished, as the back part where the engines would be doesn't seem to be there. Interesting development with the glowy core in the mid-rear of the ship, i'd like to see that worked with some more. The outline is a bit jagged, along with the internal work, but it's still passable. I'd recommend matching up some of the "lines" on the sprites to alleviate this.
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LactoseTolerant said right. violet glow is not too suitable for a grey ship body. I think cyan or light blue are better. They have a plasma, reacting flame feel. For violet glowing, I prefer to use red/blue/light blue ship body.
Secondly, I suggest the side wings of the ship have a feather design, like your third posted ship.
Secondly, I suggest the side wings of the ship have a feather design, like your third posted ship.
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Re: My second ship!
I think the shape of the ships are excellent, better than anything I can come up with, but I think coloring can use some change. Just a tad less pink IMO
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If you can't get it right;
Then off you go, but don't call quits;
Just go make custom sprites.
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Re: My second ship!
I finaly had some time to create a ship cus in 3 months I'll be in college , here it is !!
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I like the colour scheme and the section work, it has this brutal, macabre feel to it. It's kinda menacing in that way
What ruins it, unfortunatly, is the fact that the sections around the centre and back areas are rather bland, by comparison. They just don't have that deathly, imposing feel about them. Fix that, and keep using that style, it's really good
What ruins it, unfortunatly, is the fact that the sections around the centre and back areas are rather bland, by comparison. They just don't have that deathly, imposing feel about them. Fix that, and keep using that style, it's really good
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Re: My second ship!
I really do like the second one, not so much the red glares, but we don't get many vertically longer ships like that. I think you could do something really nice with this one.
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To be honest, you should just get rid of the glowy parts at the back or soften them, they contrast way too much. The ship itself is okay, but it doesn't have the same sort of styling as the ship before, which is a real shame, the other one was a lot better
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Re: My second ship!
Dude i think these are inspired! keep making ships like these thay are awesome, kinda remind me of cylon ships from galactica
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