I know i said i was going to leave, but i just can't stay away. I've been lurking for a while, but i haven't made any ships in some time. So here are some recent ones.(Uncolored)
Theora Research Shuttle
Thadea Heavy Drone
Lethia Defense Station
Belen Light Frigate
Adrastos Heavy Frigate
I just want some criticism. Don't be harsh unless it's absolutely necessary.
Alright, i'm back.
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Re: Alright, i'm back.
Pro-tip #1: Take your screenshots at. The. Default. Zoom. It's easy. Press "home". We don't need to see your small little ships inflated hugely.
Pro-tip #2: I don't know why most people don't already do this, but your screenshots are much easier on the eyes if you change the background to just a flat black.
As to the ships themselves, there's not a whole lot to say. They're small, the section usage on all of them but the Theora is fairly shitty, and that's kinda classy, because you're not using enough sections for your poor section-usage to be at all excusable.
Pro-tip #2: I don't know why most people don't already do this, but your screenshots are much easier on the eyes if you change the background to just a flat black.
As to the ships themselves, there's not a whole lot to say. They're small, the section usage on all of them but the Theora is fairly shitty, and that's kinda classy, because you're not using enough sections for your poor section-usage to be at all excusable.
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Re: Alright, i'm back.
I like the defense stations shape but not the sections and thats about it they all seem plane and a bit generic
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Re: Alright, i'm back.
No flow and monotone. My biggest problem.
Section usage is surprisingly decent. Compo is just ruining it.
Section usage is surprisingly decent. Compo is just ruining it.