Good evening.
I have few ships, and I'd like to know how well made they are... So I thought of stealing some space from the forum in order to get some kind of advice on how to continue on building more ships, or to stop building ships for good.
´Goodbye´
It is pink, I like pink. The ship has a big laser turret, but no other weapons yet. The ships name will change, most likely.
'True'
This one opens up, and fires a Large Railgun, It still does not work. I can't make the fake aegis on the wings to fade when the ship is in closed state. I'm building the ship in its open form.
'The Archiver'
With three blazing hot energy cannons and a ship faster than my pants, what can go wrong?
I like to make my ships Metagame-balanced, although they usually don’t follow all the technology rules. And I have built ships before this, for half a year or so when bored, but they have been mostly horrible.
Some stuff, that ain't so good, or it's what I think:
'Kite'
Very weird, could have been good...
'Shade'
Two batteries of cannons in front. I think the cannons are a bit too big. And the color is wrong =P.
Thank you for your time.
Hello, It's Rose here. Few ships, slightly pink ones.
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Hello, It's Rose here. Few ships, slightly pink ones.
Last edited by Siniruusu on Mon Feb 22, 2010 10:09 pm, edited 6 times in total.
The shape overall shape of the ship is solid, and the section-usage is really nice. The pink glowy bits might be a tad bit too saturated, but otherwise the colors are working too.
I really like how the pink glowy bits poke out through the holes in the engines in the back, it makes for some nice detail.
I really like how the pink glowy bits poke out through the holes in the engines in the back, it makes for some nice detail.
Fly me to the moon, so I can play among the stars~
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars~
Let me see what spring is like on Jupiter and Mars~
Not half bad, actually. I'm not a huge fan of the pinkness (it's come out as more of a magenta tone, which might be why) but the shading is spot on.
This. Also, the rear/central redness reminds me of the ADAM extraction needles used by the Little Sisters in Bioshock.Chiiro wrote:I really like how the pink glowy bits poke out through the holes in the engines in the back, it makes for some nice detail.
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Pretty good ships. Not too gratuitous use of gnr_sw sprites, and saturation isn't too high on the pink. The Kite's outer arms are very... oddily oval-shaped. There's just something not right about that.
The arms are done well on the 'True'. I also see some shading depthing going on at the edges.
Overall, good work, and keep on building!
The arms are done well on the 'True'. I also see some shading depthing going on at the edges.
Overall, good work, and keep on building!