impwarior's "human" fleet

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Impwarior
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impwarior's "human" fleet

Post by Impwarior »

well since I've been here for a good while but never posted anything...
I've decided to post up some of my ships:
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A cargo ship... kinda basic.
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Now the same ship but with actual cargo.
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a small civilian ship(yes its ment to look like a heep of junk).
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civilian ship but with weapons.
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a ship used by the police forces to keep order(only really has 1 gun)
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some of a new military ship i'm making
more ships to come
EDIT:even MOAR ships!
Last edited by Impwarior on Wed Feb 17, 2010 7:22 am, edited 3 times in total.
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Post by Blade Skydancer »

Welcome. First off, try editing your post to get rid of the "?action=view&current=" from your IMG URLs, so that instead of "http://s877.photobucket.com/albums/ab33 ... reen00.png" it looks like "http://s877.photobucket.com/albums/ab33 ... reen00.png"

Anyway, I have to ask; is this your first foray into shipmaking? If so, these are pretty good. A little small and simplistic for my tastes, but that can be both a blessing and a curse. I noticed on the civilian ship, the blue bridge of the core is visible; try and cover that up some.

Pretty nice work overall, especially for a first timer if that's indeed true. Try making some military vessels.
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Impwarior wrote:well since I've been here for a good while but never posted anything...
I've decided to post up some of my ships:
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A cargo ship... kinda basic.
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Now the same ship but with actual cargo.
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a small civilian ship(yes its ment to look like a heep of junk).
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civilian ship but with weapons.
more ships to come
NOTE:yes i can't imbed pics.
EDIT:more ships!
Interesting little ships. I especially like the little "civilian" one, but I'd cover the core personally; it stands out a bit much and the little blue orb doesn't really go with the ship's color scheme.
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Blade Skydancer wrote: Anyway, I have to ask; is this your first foray into shipmaking? If so, these are pretty good. A little small and simplistic for my tastes, but that can be both a blessing and a curse. I noticed on the civilian ship, the blue bridge of the core is visible; try and cover that up some.

Pretty nice work overall, especially for a first timer if that's indeed true. Try making some military vessels.
nah i've been making ships since i joined the fourms but these are my first wit hthe new pieces.
DeathsHand wrote:Interesting little ships. I especially like the little "civilian" one, but I'd cover the core personally; it stands out a bit much and the little blue orb doesn't really go with the ship's color scheme.
thanks.yeah ill remove the orb later.
[img]http://s877.photobucket.com/albums/ab332/impwarior/SMscreen013.png[/img][img]http://s877.photobucket.com/albums/ab332/impwarior/SMscreen014.png[/img]
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Post by Terry007abc »

They are some of the best ships i have seen yet!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Were did you get the sprites?
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Terry007abc wrote:They are some of the best ships i have seen yet!
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D
Were did you get the sprites?
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Post by Imaillusion »

For the cargo ship, try to put some rope-like doodads between the ship and the cargo. It looks a bit weird to have cargo simply floating around

The ship with that hexigonal shield? That yellow colouring is a bit too bright when compared to the rest of the ship, tone it down. Also, fill up that back sections, because without the yellow it would look weird having a massive hole in the back (unless you put thrusters there)

And finally that ship in the blue hue looks really sweet, like it's some sort of boss ship or something. I say you make ships like that, it's a good style.
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Post by Impwarior »

Imaillusion wrote: And finally that ship in the blue hue looks really sweet, like it's some sort of boss ship or something. I say you make ships like that, it's a good style.
its not even finnished yet :lol:
and i've taken to building dreadnoughts so this might be a while till i give proper ships
UPDATE:during construction of a new dreadnought/super-carrier the shipyard was attacked by an unknown alian force. :cry:
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any information regarding these alian ships should be reported to the human defence center.
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Post by Imaillusion »

Dude. The quality of that last screen shot is messed up. Like, REALLY messed up
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Post by AlphaDetisMegas »

thats probably what he mean to do, sorta like an action shot.
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Post by Dat Viymese »

I love the fact that this topic has a background, wherareas mine doesn't yet, the ships are very good, nice section usage and good ideas!
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Post by Imaillusion »

AlphaDetisMegas wrote:thats probably what he mean to do, sorta like an action shot.
But it's so... random. And I want to see what his new ship looks like :|
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Post by Chiiro »

Imaillusion wrote:
AlphaDetisMegas wrote:thats probably what he mean to do, sorta like an action shot.
But it's so... random. And I want to see what his new ship looks like :|
It's a sly way of showing you a peek of what he's working on while he's still fiddling with details. ;o
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Post by Impwarior »

Chiiro wrote:
Imaillusion wrote:
AlphaDetisMegas wrote:thats probably what he mean to do, sorta like an action shot.
But it's so... random. And I want to see what his new ship looks like :|
It's a sly way of showing you a peek of what he's working on while he's still fiddling with details. ;o
yep.
and now the ship itself.
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armed with its own hanger bay it can be used as both a frontline ship and a small base.
in other news:there has been an ongoing investigation into those attacking ships and currently we think we may have recovered a working model.
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Post by 25000st »

The shield IMO is too bright. I would also not go with turquoise and dark blue if I were you. I can see the lines you were trying to make in this ship but it is not working very well because the sections you've used do not flow together very well, at least in the front half of the ship. The back half is actually very well made.
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