need critisism before opening a shipyard...

[evildude]

hellowww everybody... i would like to didecate myself to fighters and light cruizers but i before making a shipyard out of it id like to have criticis



upper left corner is the graros
upper right is seiga
middle is the skorpion
bottom left is deijag
and bottom right is eskor



a group of skorpions attacking nagaya[/list]

[Kiltric]

There seems to be a problem with your image. Try again.

[evildude]

beacause i see them okay...

[LactoseTolerant]

There seems to be a problem with your image. Try again.

Image works fine on my side. It might be your browser.

Nothing really special here, i'm mostly glad that it's not a huge jumble of repetition or random sprites. The Garos's outline looks interesting, it's probably worth considering building a larger version. Nothing particularly eye catching, but nothing necessarily eye-burning.

[Imaillusion]

Nothing really special here, i'm mostly glad that it's not a huge jumble of repetition or random sprites. The Garos's outline looks interesting, it's probably worth considering building a larger version. Nothing particularly eye catching, but nothing necessarily eye-burning.

Basically what he said. All of your ships, except for maybe Graros, aren't really that good, in that the sections you used, how they are used, and the overall way you percive your ships is pretty outdated (these sort of designs died out a long time ago)

That being said, since these are probaly your first ships, and you did ask for some advice, I will give you some...

1. Go to fourm index and click on the custom content page. You'll find a ton of different section sprites to use, which will make your ships more unique. If you want, you can even make your own sections to suit your style. And for that matter, go to the Shipmaking Info And Resources page, where you'll find any addition infomation and also some more guides.

2.Look at other people's ships. Any of them. Even the bad ones. Because when doing this you'll not only get a feel of what good and bad ships look like, you'll also probaly be reading the post from other people, explaining why a ship is good or bad.

3.Keep posting ships. People will be willing to offer more criticism and help as you go.

Wants to write more, but is too lazy...

[evildude]

thanks man
i didnt know stuff like that could become outdated...

[dgms17]

I think your ships aren't that bad, I mean, besides the Left bottom one. I also don't think they are very special, so you shouldn't give them cool names, like the scorpion. Also scorpion isn't very original.