Hi, after lurking these forums for some time I decided to post a few ships.
Long Range Support Frigate - Hull 2 - Gazelle Class
3x Railgun (spinal mount)
1x Gatling gun
2x Flak Cannon
1x PD machine-gun
Heavy Beam Frigate - Hull 6 - Serpent Class
1x Dual Heavy Beam (spinal mount)
2x Heavy Beam (spinal mount)
2x Machine-gun
1x Auto-cannon
2x Flak Cannon
Armoured Destroyer - Hull 17 - Titan Class
3x Repeating Blasters
3x Blasters
4x Flak Cannon
What you think?
Germanica Shipyards (newbie ships)
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There might be quite some promise in this. I'm glad to see someone who's lurked and actually made something of the experience.
Your ships are classical bricks. No more and yet no less. The internal work is quite good for a first timer, if a little cluttered on the first one and a little simple on the last. They might be just a tad too brickish, especially the destroyer, but that's personal taste.
Your colorwork and section usage is on a decent level, quite good even considering you're new. The Serpent's nose might be considered too straight, though. Might I suggest you add some antennaes or prongs? Otherwise the Gazelle's angled engine baffles look out of place.
That's about it. Solid ships, very good for a first timer. You've avoided many mistakes made by your average newbie, which is in itself an achievement. Welcome to the forums, I hope to see you improve. I believe you have quite some potential judging from these first ships.
Your ships are classical bricks. No more and yet no less. The internal work is quite good for a first timer, if a little cluttered on the first one and a little simple on the last. They might be just a tad too brickish, especially the destroyer, but that's personal taste.
Your colorwork and section usage is on a decent level, quite good even considering you're new. The Serpent's nose might be considered too straight, though. Might I suggest you add some antennaes or prongs? Otherwise the Gazelle's angled engine baffles look out of place.
That's about it. Solid ships, very good for a first timer. You've avoided many mistakes made by your average newbie, which is in itself an achievement. Welcome to the forums, I hope to see you improve. I believe you have quite some potential judging from these first ships.
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Wow, AD said everything I was gonna say. Here's one: Try to avoid zooming in/out unless the ship is so absurdly small/large. It makes it blurs the "outline" of the sections. Can't wait to see more.
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