New ship armada.

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:41 am

New ship docking, Im currently making a story out of it.

Danny420Dale · Post by **Danny420Dale** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 12:54 am

That's actually okay-looking. There's mirroring errors along the keel, and the holes in the hull are a bit jarring, but the colors work okay.

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:42 am

Thanks, Couple more ships of mine for the Plasmide cronum.

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:51 am

They're okay. You really should change the color. I personally would change the dark turquoise to gray. Other then that, they're actually decent.

Wyrmaster · Post by **Wyrmaster** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:57 am

it looks good keep up the good work!!!!

Post by **Arcalane** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:03 am

Wyrmaster wrote:it looks good keep up the good work!!!!

I know you're new here but that's no excuse not to read the rules. The main thread is HERE.

Ignorance is not an excuse.

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 5:06 am

@Wyrmaster. I think what Arcalane means is that you're not supposed to post really short. However don't take things people say here too personally. People tend to be a bit extreme around here.

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:05 am

New fighter

LactoseTolerant · Post by **LactoseTolerant** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 11:30 am

Not bad. The lowest sections of the front look pretty interesting with the layering you have there.

Also, you might want to consider this tip Arcalane gave to me:

Arcalane wrote:Big Mistake #1: You've pretty much used ONLY Kae's Generic sections as far as I can see. Bad move. You need to try and use more of the other SWA sections where possible. Not easy, no, but it's doable and it'll look better in the long run.

In your case, it's only TSA sprites. And TSA sprites are not very easy to work with, as their design and function can get very specific.

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:40 pm

Ok thanks that will probably help as my part usage is limited with the standard SWA.

Jokarun · Post by **Jokarun** » Fri Jan 15, 2010 9:15 am

for some reason, your third and fourth ships seem to be facing backwards, but otherwise I kind of like your designing...

Don't those fighters lag when used en masse?

Zoid Crusader · Post by **Zoid Crusader** » Fri Jan 15, 2010 10:55 am

No it dosent lag, and thanks for the complements.

Killerhurtz · Post by **Killerhurtz** » Fri Jan 15, 2010 11:14 am

I like the general shape of your ships, but the color's icky, in my opinion. Perhaps a little bit too dark, and lacking a bit of shades. But that's just me, I'm far from being a pro.

Still, good work!