Update time!
Worked on the asymmetric heavy, and I think I finished it (Tried to make a cover, failed hard, but I think I caught up decently enough.
First things first: the end result.
And now, my favorite ship up to now: Realist result (somewhat, because there's only distant ambient sources in space). I really am proud of that result:
Any comments?
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A mix between the second and first would be good, basically darken the first one, keeping depth but making it much more subtle, add the extra glows from the second one, and recolor the top side pod, from greyscale to a reddish or a greenish color, to keep it looking like it is completely foreign.
Also in the second one, there is a tiny glowing blue point near the top by the green engine, try making the section that it is on part of the foreign engine, then it looks like it it strapped on rather than underneath it. Or just sitting to the side.
Also in the second one, there is a tiny glowing blue point near the top by the green engine, try making the section that it is on part of the foreign engine, then it looks like it it strapped on rather than underneath it. Or just sitting to the side.
Something about that gun on the top rubs me the wrong way here. Sorry. The rest is nice.
Also, that glow near the front seems a bit distracting.
But its a good asymmetrical ship!
Also, that glow near the front seems a bit distracting.
But its a good asymmetrical ship!
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Update again. I am pretty damn proud of this one, and probably will do only minor tweaks after this. I consider it the pretty final product:
Comments?
Comments?
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Yes, it is fully armed (there's the twin machinegun on the left side, and if you look on the right wing, you can see that there's six cannons poking out of it).
Also, I'm already working on my next creation. This one'll be a station (The series can wait a bit...)
Also, I'm already working on my next creation. This one'll be a station (The series can wait a bit...)
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