Shadowbane's random ships

shadowbane · Post by **shadowbane** » Sat Dec 26, 2009 12:16 pm

New ship! Bat

Droid · Post by **Droid** » Sat Dec 26, 2009 2:19 pm

For one, I'd turn down the glow on the...core-ish area.
Too saturated.

Silver Swordsman · Post by **Silver Swordsman** » Sat Dec 26, 2009 6:30 pm

Droid is right. You need to do something about the core. Now I like the fringe effects of it, but you need to put something in the center, like something "white-hot", but right now the center is a bit "bland"

shadowbane · Post by **shadowbane** » Wed Dec 30, 2009 8:38 am

Yeah, I know the name is pretty unimaginative, but here's another ship made out of mecha sections. Please give comments and suggestions! (I tried to make the core better

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shadowbane · Post by **shadowbane** » Wed Dec 30, 2009 12:10 pm

Here's a new ship in the same theme as the falcon and a revised edition of the falcon. Please, please give suggestions!

revised falcon:

Kazutek · Post by **Kazutek** » Thu Dec 31, 2009 4:02 am

very good on the glows. Central glows though look a bit... off. Maybe its the fact that the SW-style sprite is showing underneath the glow. Tried a flat sprite for the glow base for the center glows?

Skull13 · Post by **Skull13** » Thu Dec 31, 2009 6:44 am

I think that the wings are a bit too repetitive, but the rest of the ship looks nice.

LactoseTolerant · Post by **LactoseTolerant** » Thu Dec 31, 2009 1:18 pm

Skull13 wrote:I think that the wings are a bit too repetitive...

I second that notion. Nothing especially eyecatching on the ship, the transformational trigger isn't that spectacular either, but it's solid. It's not too cluttered with the mecha sprites too.

shadowbane · Post by **shadowbane** » Fri Jan 01, 2010 9:31 am

another new ship!
I just put the picture in the first post this time!
Tried a wing variation, and thought it looked like a bat, so I named it the bat.
Please give more suggestions!

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Sat Jan 02, 2010 1:16 am

Bat looks nice. I really don't have any criticism for it. It's just plain good.

shadowbane · Post by **shadowbane** » Mon Jan 11, 2010 7:29 am

New ship, I call it the Icyca
So, I'm not much of a shipbuilder, but I had a sudden urge to make a hunk of junk, and here it is. Tell me what you think.

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:53 am

It looks pretty good. Cyan is a bit too saturated. Dark gray might be too dark.
Keep it up

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Shadowbane's random ships

Shadowbane's random ships

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