So. I've returned, after a while. Within, a ship.

Manifold1 · Post by **Manifold1** » Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:01 pm

A while ago now, I sort of quit BSF. Probably because I found something else to do, but whatever. I come back, and I'm greeted with this awesome new version.

I dicked around for a while, and made this:

Constructive criticism encouraged.

Merry Christmas, everybody

Napalm · Post by **Napalm** » Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:12 pm

Looks pretty nice. Needs a bit of depth coloring, too. but than again that's just me.

InkFox · Post by **InkFox** » Fri Dec 25, 2009 3:18 pm

agreed on the depthing, but also: don't use soft and rigid sections together unless you can make the flow real good; it becomes confusing.

Really liking the shape though, keep it up.

Silver Swordsman · Post by **Silver Swordsman** » Fri Dec 25, 2009 11:43 pm

First, you may want to change the inner sections. As other have put it, soft and hard edges don't mix.

Second, you need to make tone differences to make the ship feel "3d".

Third I seriously recommend that you cover that blue dot in the middle.

Bentusi · Post by **Bentusi** » Sat Dec 26, 2009 12:14 am

lovely ship, on my opinion that ship don't need upgrades