New Range of Ships
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New Range of Ships
This is hopefully the first in a range of ships depending on general feed back from everyone.
Im rubbish at back stories but will give it a go.
The Koumari Federation is a new empire steadily working its way to glory. Like most empires it has a need for ships to claim and hold new territories.
Federation Alpha (Speed)
Federation Alpha (Assault)
This ship has a dual purpose, quickly striking distant colonies out of nowhere and forming the main battle line in an assault. As a result it has a modifiable weapons array and two distinct forms which it can change between for any confrontation.
All CnC taken, will don flamesuit if neccessary.
Im rubbish at back stories but will give it a go.
The Koumari Federation is a new empire steadily working its way to glory. Like most empires it has a need for ships to claim and hold new territories.
Federation Alpha (Speed)
Federation Alpha (Assault)
This ship has a dual purpose, quickly striking distant colonies out of nowhere and forming the main battle line in an assault. As a result it has a modifiable weapons array and two distinct forms which it can change between for any confrontation.
All CnC taken, will don flamesuit if neccessary.
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You need more color variation. Why it looks cluttered and repetitive is partially because you're using the same color for 90% of the time. Try this: Higher places have a lighter shade, and lower places have a lower shade. Set for yourself a "focus point" for your ships, and try to make that part stand out as much as possible (more contrast). Use as many ways as you can.
If Cycerin won't kill me for this, I'd like to use his ship as an example:
Notice that all his spikes point towards the center of the ship, and the most glows and thingys appear in the core region. That place NATURALLY draws your eye there.
Hope this helps.
If Cycerin won't kill me for this, I'd like to use his ship as an example:
Notice that all his spikes point towards the center of the ship, and the most glows and thingys appear in the core region. That place NATURALLY draws your eye there.
Hope this helps.
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