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Fanboy ship time!!!! pg2

Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 11:45 pm
by Doogie12
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Behold, Scorpion.

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Scarab
The first one i made using only Kae mech sections. At the end I experimented with one of Arc's thruster sprites and it turned out really well I think.

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Mantis
I just deleted a bunch of sections on Scarab and moved a few of the pieces in the back to the front. Looks nice though.

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Wasp
If you can't figure out how i made this, then something is wrong with you...

...and now for the crappy small ships!
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Drone
(as in the drone of a beehive social class)

Edit* updated Drone
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Gnat
As you can see, i have no talent for smaller ships.

Edit* updated Gnat.
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Aaaaaand a fleet shot with hestia for size comparison
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Comments and Criticism much needed.

Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 6:42 am
by Bentusi
this is the first time I see someone use that section as if the eye of the ship (or the commando bridge), and I must admit that it looks good :)

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 3:24 am
by Rugdumph
Ooo, the top three i definately like. The last two..not quite as much but maybe scale down the thruster and put it in like the bigger ships. You're also much better at shading than i am. Nice work.

Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:27 am
by LactoseTolerant
The Scarab is quite good, and ingenious use of the center glow. The arms seem a bit thin, though.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 6:22 am
by Doogie12
@Bentusi: Yea I was actually just trying to see if Arc's thruster sprite would be in that ugly black box or not, and to tell you the truth thats actually the default position the "eye" is in, it is fake aegised and is messed around however.

@Rugdumph: Er...What thrusters? None of these ships have thrusters...Since they are obviously alien they use a strange gravity technology that actually PULLS them toward the desired position.

@LactoseTolerant: I suppose it is, but since those images have no scaling correlation you probably wouldn't realize that the Scarab is quite large; about the size of the Nagaya3ship. However I kinda like the thinner arms...it really helps pull off the insect like nature of these ships.

Working on a bigger ship in the same kind of design...however not enough of it is done yet to even give a preview. I will also change Drone and Gnat when I have time.

Edit* The bigger ship, Scorpion, is now up. Enjoy.

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:39 am
by Rugdumph
I meant the red glow bit made out of one of arca's thruster glow sprites, sos for the mix up

Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 7:44 am
by Doogie12
Oh, I tried that but I don't know it was like...overkill?
I think i'm just gonna use the shrink-every-section method to make a good fighter...cause otherwise I suck at making the little ships

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 6:20 am
by Doogie12
New ship is up. Scorpion, massive juggernaut that fires many beams and bullets alike.

(sory for the double post...and theres not enough time to call it a bump)

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 8:54 am
by Kiltric
Perhaps an action shot would help, but Scorpion looks a bit dull. The sections are all fairly well placed, but you have a large molten glow in the middle and then three slightly different shades of the same color on the rest.
I guess I just want to see function from the whole of the structure. As is, it seems like a lump (albeit a very pretty one) with a big red eye.

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 10:38 am
by Doogie12
Action shot eh? Does this work?
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By the way scorpion owned that thing :)

Posted: Thu Dec 10, 2009 2:44 pm
by jwa8402
Ok, I'll admit that is one of the more organic looking ships I've seen recently. Looks kinda like This

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 11:29 am
by Kiltric
Doogie12 wrote:Action shot eh? Does this work?
It does indeed.

Posted: Sat Dec 12, 2009 7:51 pm
by Kazutek
Holy <bleep> the concept and design :shock:

That both inspires and destroys my will to make ships.

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 10:04 am
by Doogie12
May I have any criticism on the fighters? I really do need help when it comes to smaller craft.

Posted: Sun Dec 13, 2009 1:32 pm
by LactoseTolerant
Doogie12 wrote:May I have any criticism on the fighters? I really do need help when it comes to smaller craft.
Kaelis' DSTech sprites have alot of smaller sections, which can be helpful. Try making ships with more than just Mecha sprites, as most of them are quite large.

http://www.wyrdysm.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=4551