Clairvoyance and Malice

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:26 am

i'm new to the forums but i think i got the hang of shipmaking down, sure they could use some work (and i am too lazy to put them on photobucket) so here is the link to Clairvoyance,

and Malice,

i used bits of almost all custom sprites i could find, but most come from Blackhart and the basic ones by Kaelis, i also used HorseMonster's thruster sprite

Droid · Post by **Droid** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:29 am

Pictures plox.

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:32 am

i believe i already adressed that being "too lazy to use photobucket"

Jokarun · Post by **Jokarun** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:35 am

then nobody will rate your ships...
I doubt there will be many people that will dl a ship they know nothing about...

Icy · Post by **Icy** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:36 am

just use http://www.imagehost.org/ for your pictures (its free without an account)

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 7:51 am

Malice is more generic looking, but thats what i want it to be, plus i like the way its lasers are.

Clairvoyance is what i think is my all time best work

Jokarun · Post by **Jokarun** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:07 am

The malice looks very Cluttered...

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:11 am

hmmm, the malice didn't really use many sections (for its size)

LactoseTolerant · Post by **LactoseTolerant** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:29 am

Clairvoyance has quite an intresting design around the core area. Both suffer from clutter, however.

Have you considered changing to SWA style?

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:31 am

sadly i don't have anything to open ANYTHING Kaelis puts for download (explaining why i used a bubble shield for clairvoyance) and this computer is massively unprotected so it will be a while before i go SW, btw, take into consideration that i'm a noob

LactoseTolerant · Post by **LactoseTolerant** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:37 am

Doogie12 wrote:sadly i don't have anything to open ANYTHING Kaelis puts for download (explaining why i used a bubble shield for clairvoyance) and this computer is massively unprotected so it will be a while before i go SW, btw, take into consideration that i'm a noob

http://download.cnet.com/WinRAR-32-bit/ ... g=mncol;pm

Cnet is very safe. I got most of my software from there. The program to open it is called WinRar/7zip. This lets you extract the files.

And hardly anyone does normal sprites, SWA is where it's at.

And I was a choob too

. Yet everyone must keep trying their best.

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:42 am

<downloaded> i still think i need some practice at all this, anyways, does SWA decrease the cluttered look?

LactoseTolerant · Post by **LactoseTolerant** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 8:49 am

Doogie12 wrote:<downloaded> i still think i need some practice at all this, anyways, does SWA decrease the cluttered look?

If not done correctly, yeah. Doesn't really matter what style of the sprite, you can always make cluttered.

Doogie12 · Post by **Doogie12** » Thu Nov 26, 2009 12:09 pm

alright, i think i'm completely good now for SW

Silver Swordsman · Post by **Silver Swordsman** » Fri Nov 27, 2009 10:38 pm

Okay,

The first one is still sorta cluttered. Its dull and uniform throughout, looking like just a couple of sections slapped about. In other words, it looks like something thrown together in a couple minutes.

The second one looks much better. You have the "eyecatcher" with the fusion core, and my gosh, that looks sweet. You've also managed a bit with depth coloring, which is incredible for a "noob" as you say you are. SWA has something with hiding noobs well. But, then again, the second one, good job. You should develop your ships further based on this.