~Archalieus Shipyards~ - Rusty

Archives for ships and fleets. 'nuff said. Most of the ships here are very very old and will not work in current versions of BSF or SM. You have been warned!

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Post by LactoseTolerant »

Less generic...?

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Post by Silverware »

Still generic, but a different type of generic. cool looking ship(s) that haven't had their like shown before I think, cool use of large detail, and non-symmetrical pieces. Nice glows, its a solid looking ship and is really well done, Congrats.
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Post by Danny420Dale »

Too big to be "generic" IMO, and everyone in the room went "Ooooh pretty" when I pulled it up. I love that fire color of the glows, and the hull work is good too, even if it's nearly opposite my design aesthetic. Keep rolling with this! :D
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Post by LactoseTolerant »

The Ancardia kinda sucked out all my creativity after finishing it :? ...

Half decent thing i've come up so far. Late WIP.

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Post by Droid »

Hmm...I'm thinking that these (or rather, this one, as now I'm suspecting its another transforming thing) should have more hard angles and less rounded edges so it looks like its part of the same fleet as the bigger one.

Regardless, the top one looks much better than the bottom one.
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Arise, Baraci!

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Anyone out there :| ?

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Post by Silverware »

That is a neat carrier looking thing, but where is its engines?
The back looks really empty.
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Post by derekiv »

Section work is pretty good, except at the back edges.
The front looks cut off to me and I think the side pods should be a little bigger. But that's just an opinion
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Post by LactoseTolerant »

LactoseTolerant wrote:WIP.
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Engines always go on last for me.

Oh hay, 2 more fighter bays.

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Post by inteuniso »

It's a bit generic and uniform. make it a bit more depthed.
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Post by Droid »

Nice and industrial. :)
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Post by Silverware »

OMG the orange it burns!!
No seriously, that carrier is looking really good, the colors all work, and as Droid noted it does look very industrial, but more modern industrial than anything.

It does however look fat. to my mind it needs to be longer, and also it needs more places to "store" fighters in, as this thing has 3 or 5 runways it would need to have space for at least 50 or so fighters.

But great work so far can't wait to see the finished product.
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Post by LactoseTolerant »

It's starting to get a bit out of hand as I intend it to look like this:

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With smaller fighter bays/fuel tanks studded on the arms.

And some "transport relays" connecting the various parts of the outer arms.
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