Second. *now with more
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Second. *now with more
sup
you might remember my first thread, so anyway, all these new SW sections are pretty sick and all and I decided to try my hand at making a ship.
you might remember my first thread, so anyway, all these new SW sections are pretty sick and all and I decided to try my hand at making a ship.
Last edited by Room21 on Sun Sep 20, 2009 11:57 am, edited 2 times in total.
This is pretty good overall. I like the front cause I love those smooth plating-over-substructure sections, but I think the section choice is somewhat jumbled overall. Needs more distinct depthing and a pass of color and all that crud. hull shape's also kinda plain.
oh & use f9 when getting screenshots and take them at 100% zoom for max crispness.
oh & use f9 when getting screenshots and take them at 100% zoom for max crispness.
Last edited by Cycerin on Thu Sep 17, 2009 10:10 pm, edited 1 time in total.
http://i153.photobucket.com/albums/s233 ... efton2.png
Changed around some parts, took out some of the more blocky sections.
Any thoughts, comments and criticism is much appreciated!
Changed around some parts, took out some of the more blocky sections.
Any thoughts, comments and criticism is much appreciated!
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Also, use F9. Then you can just click and drag and it automatically screenshots the area and saves it as a .png. It's handier and looks less ugly. And hit "Home" to set it to default zoom as well... there's no reason to zoom in that far.
The fighter thing looks okay. I don't like the other ship much at all, but am presently too tired to offer a proper critiquing. I'll be back to do that later.
The fighter thing looks okay. I don't like the other ship much at all, but am presently too tired to offer a proper critiquing. I'll be back to do that later.
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It's a decent little ship, albeit extremely grey. The rear end looks unfinished, I would probably add some angled thrusters partially beneath the side cowling, possibly break up the slightly blancmangey back end with something along the spine.
Also the off centre 'cockpits' bug the hell out of me.
Your first ship reminds me of a deformed Kronosaur. There is not much in the way of a coherent shape to the latter half and the Kronosaur head looks overextended. Section use while not untidy as such, again lacks coherency.
Also the off centre 'cockpits' bug the hell out of me.
Your first ship reminds me of a deformed Kronosaur. There is not much in the way of a coherent shape to the latter half and the Kronosaur head looks overextended. Section use while not untidy as such, again lacks coherency.