Since you asked so nicely, Portal:
http://www.wyrdysm.com/battleshipsforev ... aFleet.zip
http://www.wyrdysm.com/battleshipsforev ... prites.zip
You'll also need Kae_mechasw.
25000st, I disagree that the bow of the assault destroyer is cluttered - I'd say it looks more textured. I might try refining it a little, particularly where the arcs join the outer armour, but otherwise I'm very happy with how it turned out.
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So I just noticed that TSA had released a sprite pack or two, and wanted some feedback on this little thing - especially since it's been a while since I made anything and was feeling a bit rusty.
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TheShipwrightArms
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The overall shape is interesting and quite original. First impressions are the the ship appears quite flat.
There are some sections which I am not sure what they are bringing to the party - specifically the fan-shaped jobs at the rear.
The round bit in the oval hole doesn't seem to work for me. I would try moving the round bit forward and reworking the connecting fans.
Also the weapons on orange mounts looks slightly scruffy/jarring. Could try adding differently coloured smaller mounts on top of the orange guys, see how that looks.
Keep going dude.
There are some sections which I am not sure what they are bringing to the party - specifically the fan-shaped jobs at the rear.
The round bit in the oval hole doesn't seem to work for me. I would try moving the round bit forward and reworking the connecting fans.
Also the weapons on orange mounts looks slightly scruffy/jarring. Could try adding differently coloured smaller mounts on top of the orange guys, see how that looks.
Keep going dude.