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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 8:50 pm
by derekiv
I love these. All of them are extremely coherent

Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 10:54 pm
by Dragontear
The large carrier unit is wonderful, I rather like the style with the spires and ribs. Whilst the silver ships before hand are great in section usage and overall shapes, but look a bit stretched here and there. On a random note, the seem...clinical or sterile for some reason, probably due to the colours and clean, uncluttered and robotic look.

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:03 am
by Blackhart
Well I re-coloured the carrier and made a few touch ups, take a look.

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Tell me what you think.

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 9:33 am
by 25000st
OMG!

That is some nice repetition you have there. I'm not too fond of the circular shape however.

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 1:46 pm
by MagusZero
Imo it's great. The new colors help a lot.

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 4:29 pm
by Dragontear
Even better! Something about the circular shape that appeals so much more than general 90' corners. I can't think of much to say, but I like this a lot.

Posted: Thu Sep 24, 2009 7:38 pm
by derekiv
This is one of my favorite SW ships ever. Only thing I dislike is how it end abruptly at the back

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 4:38 am
by Blackhart
There.

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Extended the back end a bit so it doesn't end so abruptly.

Oh... And also this.

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I feel that the back engines need a little beefing up, what do you guys think?

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 5:10 am
by MagusZero
On the first one, the grey spikes at the back seem sort of out of place. Otherwise still great.

The second one... Not really sure what it is that bugs me about it. Maybe its just that its a diamond shape. I'd've made the back more W shaped. But it still looks reasonably nice.

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 6:15 am
by Kiltric
I love the shape of the first now, but I agree that the grey sections seem a little odd. Perhaps just depthing might make them seem better.

The second is very nice, but I have a nitpick with the style in general. You've combined two in a way. With the way that the front half is so smooth and crisp it makes some of the jagged parts seem rather out of place or vice-versa. Mainly, the very end of the nose seems a bit odd and chunky compared to the smooth fuselage. Then engines too, seem a bit.... misplaced? maybe.

Posted: Sun Sep 27, 2009 11:58 am
by th15
I don't think the engines are too small, but maybe if you opened the two rear triangle things it might look more balanced.

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 3:07 am
by Blackhart
Here's a update for my newer ship.

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As you can see I changed the back up a bit, but I withheld myself changing the front until I can find a good way to make it a bit more sleek.
I was also thinking of making a custom shield for this ship when it is done.

I won't be updating as much since I'm up to my neck in homework, but I'll still work on my ships from time to time.

So what do you guys think?

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 4:03 am
by MagusZero
That ship still has a nice style, but the more I look at it the more backward it seems. Neither side actually seems like the front, but somehow the back looks more like the front than the front does.

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 6:15 am
by praetors
nice ship, I like how you used the sections :)

Posted: Sat Oct 03, 2009 9:13 am
by AidanAdv
The new ship is quite nice, it reminds me of what I wanted to do with one of my old WIPs. No real complaints from me about it.

I like the carrier concept you've posted and would love to see a fleet based around the same style.