Dachplatte's Shipyard - Sixth Behemoth Update - 26 July
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Dachplatte's Shipyard - Sixth Behemoth Update - 26 July
Newbie ships <- My first ships, not part of any fleet
Other Ships
Taurellian 'Spike' Fleet
Googolian 'Agressor' Fleet
Taurellian 'Experimental' Ships <- Currently working on this.
Available downloads
- Banana Ship
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Edit - Changed the thread name to "Dachplatte's Shipyard"
Edit - Cleaned the thread somewhat up, it began to look like a garbage bin
Other Ships
Taurellian 'Spike' Fleet
Googolian 'Agressor' Fleet
Taurellian 'Experimental' Ships <- Currently working on this.
Available downloads
- Banana Ship
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Edit - Changed the thread name to "Dachplatte's Shipyard"
Edit - Cleaned the thread somewhat up, it began to look like a garbage bin
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Ok, here are a few tips that you can apply to almost any ship, especially these ones.
Aegis is easily abused. Use it sparingly. It doesn't look good, and it easily makes a ship far too powerful.
Ships tend to look better when they're 'fleshed out,' if that makes sense. When I see your ships, I get the impression that they're very spindly and frail. The sections aren't placed particularly well, either. Use some variety and don't forget to build width as you build length.
Aegis is easily abused. Use it sparingly. It doesn't look good, and it easily makes a ship far too powerful.
Ships tend to look better when they're 'fleshed out,' if that makes sense. When I see your ships, I get the impression that they're very spindly and frail. The sections aren't placed particularly well, either. Use some variety and don't forget to build width as you build length.
Hmmm, the Aegis abuse isn't through the roof on these, though, except the station... The colour is still gag-inducing, but they're not exactly overpowered in this case.
As for fleshing them out, agreed. These things are just a few sections glued together with nary a drop of superglue... I've had paper airplanes that looked more solid than these. Give 'em some food, even I think these are skinny, and I weigh but a hundred pounds. Also... No holes please, holes in a ship never looks good like this...
As for fleshing them out, agreed. These things are just a few sections glued together with nary a drop of superglue... I've had paper airplanes that looked more solid than these. Give 'em some food, even I think these are skinny, and I weigh but a hundred pounds. Also... No holes please, holes in a ship never looks good like this...
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ok, i looked trough your tips and made a new ship, i tried to flesh it out a little bit more. it's only the "skeleton", i still need to add weapons
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more ships!
a moving "shipyard" it doesn't have any weapons, except the demeters
some kind of battleship
a moving "shipyard" it doesn't have any weapons, except the demeters
some kind of battleship
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Taurellian 'Spike' Fleet
So, i built a fleet . I called it the 'spike' fleet because they have *cough* spikes (Sorry, I didn't have any inspiration ).
Stalagmite: (Dreadnaught Class)
Stalactite: (Battleship Class)
Metalclaw: (Destroyer Class)
Agitator: (Cruiser Class)
Bat: (Cruiser Class)
Bee: (Corvette Class)
Wasp: (Corvette Class)
Backstory: Tau Ceti Imperium/Taurellian Imperia
- 2149. Earth is taken over by robots, lead by Google - an Artificial Intelligence that
accidentally became self-aware. A group of rebels that survived the Second Inquisition
fleed to the Tau Ceti solar system and found the Tau Ceti Imperium.
- 4563. For Hundreds of years the Taurellians grew stronger, expanding their territory
and their fleet. In the Tau Mira solar system, near Tau Ceti, multiple hostile ships were
seen . Googlian forces established a wormhole between the earth & the Tau Mira
solar system. Now it's only a matter of time until the First Intergalactic War begins...
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*edit* changed the engines
*edit* added the dreadnaught
*edit* added the backstory
So, i built a fleet . I called it the 'spike' fleet because they have *cough* spikes (Sorry, I didn't have any inspiration ).
Stalagmite: (Dreadnaught Class)
Stalactite: (Battleship Class)
Metalclaw: (Destroyer Class)
Agitator: (Cruiser Class)
Bat: (Cruiser Class)
Bee: (Corvette Class)
Wasp: (Corvette Class)
Backstory: Tau Ceti Imperium/Taurellian Imperia
- 2149. Earth is taken over by robots, lead by Google - an Artificial Intelligence that
accidentally became self-aware. A group of rebels that survived the Second Inquisition
fleed to the Tau Ceti solar system and found the Tau Ceti Imperium.
- 4563. For Hundreds of years the Taurellians grew stronger, expanding their territory
and their fleet. In the Tau Mira solar system, near Tau Ceti, multiple hostile ships were
seen . Googlian forces established a wormhole between the earth & the Tau Mira
solar system. Now it's only a matter of time until the First Intergalactic War begins...
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*edit* changed the engines
*edit* added the dreadnaught
*edit* added the backstory
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