mech ships

omega · Post by **omega** » Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:57 pm

6th ship!

I decided to use Kae Mecha sections for this. It turned into a weird alien like ship.

Another ship I made.

Invasion captain · Post by **Invasion captain** » Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:09 pm

Looks interesting to me...

bl3d4 · Post by **bl3d4** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 1:06 am

I think you have something going there. Perhaps you could further expand this ship.

Pros.
-Good use of colour to simulate depth.

Cons.
- Maybe too many glows
-Feels incomplete.

Is it incomplete?

DarchZero · Post by **DarchZero** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 1:57 am

Glowverkill. It's so out of control that the real shape is not shown. It looks like a dinghy, the depthing hints me that it's pretty much a trench in between the plates of armors.

I've got to agree with bl3d4, it's kinda incomplete, somehow. But it's worth continuing if you rebuff the glow. Is go.

Commodore111 · Post by **Commodore111** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 4:01 am

The glows actually look quite nice. However, they'd look better if they were slightly more covered by the hull.

Like, instead of C| do (| so it's more inset into the hull.

Invasion captain · Post by **Invasion captain** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:20 pm

Loks much beter to me now.

Maybe it's a litle bit wide, narow it.

SHAD0Wdump · Post by **SHAD0Wdump** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:53 pm

Mirroring errors down the middle in the rear.

maarten · Post by **maarten** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 8:42 pm

It now has a big fat green cross through the enite ship. You should make those slightly less glowy.
And maybe at some sections over the center line, it now looks like it's mirrored but not correctly. There is just this line in the center.
The circular sections on the wings don't look too great either.

And this looks like a totally differant ship, maybe make a fleet of them?

realfear · Post by **realfear** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 12:27 am

must look awsome becuase it took about 10 secs to load on my com

maarten · Post by **maarten** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:15 am

realfear wrote:must look awsome becuase it took about 10 secs to load on my com

First, learn english.
Second, what the fuck were you planning to add to this thread?
Thrid, could have just been the filesize right?

Just where did all those new shipbuilders come from?

And yes I know I am backseat modding.

Mod Edit: You're right, you are backseat modding. And if you'd read the rules, you dumb little fuck, you'd know that you shouldn't, so enjoy your warning, bitchtits.

Oh, look, this is your third official warning. Enjoy the tempban.

AlphaDetisMegas · Post by **AlphaDetisMegas** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:22 am

maarten wrote:
realfear wrote:must look awsome becuase it took about 10 secs to load on my com
First, learn english.
Second, what the fuck were you planning to add to this thread?
Thrid, could have just been the filesize right?

Just where did all those new shipbuilders come from?

And yes I know I am backseat modding.

Maarten he's just commenting on the ship,he probably wanted to add that its so awesome it took a long time to load the pic,and about the third one,it probably is the filesize.

Anyway, thats a nice ship you got there, all the green glows make me think BORG

a minor nitpick though, try and modify that antenna in the arms of the ship, its sticking out too much, the black gray clashes with the light gray and the green glow

Danny420Dale · Post by **Danny420Dale** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:24 am

Awesome ship is awesome. Try some slight variations of the green for the glows as well. Shape and execution are pretty well top notch, however.

maarten wrote:And yes I know I am backseat modding.

Fuck off, TROLL.

Imperator Pavel I · Post by **Imperator Pavel I** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 4:45 am

It does look good. too much glow for me though.

Add Specifications and a DL file.

I rate on a system of nine degrees. Ten will be used very rarely.

1 = Go to Hades.
2 = Extremely bad
3 = Really Bad
4 = Bad
5 = In between
6 = Good
7 = Really Good
8 = Awesome
9 = Awe-Inspiring
10 = The heavens open up for you and your peice of art...

Glows: 7
Sectionwork: 9
Shape: 10
Execution: 10
Total: 36

This will be my Sig from now on.

Bottom side on picture is one pixel forward.

omega · Post by **omega** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 5:42 am

Fixed the mirroring. Changed some of the glows and shortened the antenna. I still kept it dark though.

Edit: So sad to have so many people getting themselves temp-banned.

Lizzie · Post by **Lizzie** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:46 am

omega wrote:Edit: So sad to have so many people getting themselves temp-banned.

No it's sad we have so many fucking morons joining the forums.

Are we going to get a updated pic of the fixes you've done or not?