The Fighter Carier

Invasion captain · Post by **Invasion captain** » Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:33 pm

It's not my best ship but it is my first cariar...

Here's what he's caring...

1-ship: X-wing: 2x machineguns
2-ship: Deployed-bomber: 2x HV Rockets
3-ship: Starfal-1: 2x machineguns 2x particle guns 1x HV Rocket

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Sun Jun 21, 2009 10:51 pm

Ooh. I see you've used one of my sections. Thanks!

The carrier looks pretty good. The fake aegis look good for once! Yay! Some of the section usage bothers me. Mostly the Bsf_stock05's in the middle to the left. It stands out too much. Otherwise it's pretty good. Perhaps add a little bit more blue somewhere.

Umm... the stuff it carries. Are those just sprites copied off of the internet?

Invasion captain · Post by **Invasion captain** » Sun Jun 21, 2009 11:07 pm

No i found them on the forum...
And originaly the Kae_sec46 was blue(the front two)

AidanAdv · Post by **AidanAdv** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 12:22 am

25000st wrote:Umm... the stuff it carries. Are those just sprites copied off of the internet?

I believe those sprites were made by Jwa.

As for the carrier, it's decent for a first ship, but nothing about it really stands out. I think the two Autocannons at the front of the ship look kinda oddly placed, but the main problem with it that is really boring looking.

brenwasp · Post by **brenwasp** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 12:24 am

I agree.
Maybe add some ring to cover the glow for the core or something.

Invasion captain · Post by **Invasion captain** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 12:49 am

It's boring because I didn't reallly try to made it look like anything good.
This is my first carriar not my first ship.
And I'm not so good whit english so please don't mind.

Here are two more ships I made ...

Ionex:long range bomber

Ionex 2:longer range bomber

jwa8402 · Post by **jwa8402** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 10:24 am

I'm impressed, these are huge improvements over your previous ships, by leaps and bounds in fact. Keep doing what you are doing.

The fighter sprites were mostly a product of laziness. I'm sure you can draw something better or build something with sections and turn it into a sprite.

Invasion captain · Post by **Invasion captain** » Mon Jun 22, 2009 7:16 pm

I allready thought aboute using locust but than I chose the other one.

And i don't have it's picture i just saw it on the forum

Here's another ship.I don't consider this as one of my best ships.He is in the Junk folder I made for ships not so impresiv so here it is...

Junk-3

Veronw · Post by **Veronw** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 1:46 am

I actually like the latest ship you posted, it looks like an industrial spaceship but it could benefit from having a little less of the detailed sections on the front. Just look at the way you did the back with a mixture of detailed and less detailed sections, and emulate that with the front of the ship.

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:07 am

Invasion captain wrote:I don't consider this as one of my best ships.He is in the Junk folder I made for ships not so impresiv so here it is...

Well, actually I consider this to be your best ship. The section work on this ship is pretty good. Less detail as stated above would be good. Perhaps you should delete the Nano Matrix modules in the back. They look out of place. They are also mirrored incorrectly (including the one in the middle).

Invasion captain · Post by **Invasion captain** » Tue Jun 23, 2009 6:37 am

I didn't mirrord it good because It is in the Junk Folder and i didn't realy try to make it look good.

Here is the updateted version...

I added 2x twinautocanons on the sides and I putted a curve on the front of the ship.

Once again sorry for my bad english.