First time and first ship(s)

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ReIncarnate
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First time and first ship(s)

Post by ReIncarnate »

hi, I'm new here, I lurked for a while, and now I have gathered up enough confidence to post a ship, that being said, here I go:

AX-54 SYM "Alpha Wolf" Light Destroyer

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this ship is the precursor to the Wolfhound. It features sturdy construction, two prototype particle bolt rifles, and twin railguns as long-range weaponary. This ship does not feature any shielding, only a double front hull keeps it from becoming scrap metal in the battlefield.

for close combat the Alpha Wolf possesses two blaster cannons, as well as a gattling blaster. the blasters have been modified to pepper the opponent with a shower of low-power projectiles that significantly less damage than standard blasters. a pair of machineguns round out the bow, and twin blasters cover the aft. the ship is protected by a series of rapid-fire particle guns, and is very susceptible to beam weaponary.


X-54 SYM "Wolfhound" Light Destroyer

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(the aegised "nubs" in the rear are fake)

The wolfhound is adeptly armed and shielded, based on the original "Alpha Wolf" design, some armor was removed, and the central thruster dismantled in order to incorporate new and powerful technologies. Two experimental aegis deflectors have been installed as a lightweight replacement for the original armor paneling.

The Wolfhound keeps to tradition, and utilizes the original gattling blaster as its sister ship, though the blaster and machineguns have been replaced by gattling pulse and regular pulse cannons respectively. the railguns have also been replaced by a pair of beam lasers. Two high-velocity missile launchers round out the frontal armament.

a more reliable replacement for the particle bolt rifles were added instead on the rotating platforms. four burst-fire machineguns on each wing ensures a generous spread of bullets in the enemy. the original particle guns were outmoded and eventually replaced by point-defense lasers, though a pair still remain in the aft, the long-replaced technology gave these the nickname of: "chicago pianos"

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also, I don't think these ships are wank (though feel free to try it out for yourself), as I beat it (with some difficulty) using a cronus. two of these in tandem was able to cook a leviathan in around 2:30. Balance can be decided by the experts who are willing to contribute a small portion of time to help test the ships (no obligations).

critz and comments welcome, harsh truth if need be, as I realize (after browsing around) that it's the only way for me to improve.

EDIT: here's the current DL links for evaluation
http://www.mediafire.com/?vmzymiotjyz-Alpha Wolf
http://www.mediafire.com/?myfgit2ioti-Wolfhound
Last edited by ReIncarnate on Tue Jun 16, 2009 8:55 am, edited 6 times in total.
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Post by Homer »

Ya know, this ship has potential but first of all; I highly reccomend that you change the color no BLUE by its self its Eyeburn throw in some dark greys and light greys to help fix that. Also the rotating gun thing would be more interesting with like a turret thing. Hmm thats all, Oh welcome to the forums. :)
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Post by Danny420Dale »

Pay no attention to Homer and his run-on sentences. That blue is NOT Eyeburn. The rotating guns are a neat idea just as they are. Try targeting the Aegis to an arcshield or bubbleshield section as well. Overall, the ship's nice if a wee bit overgunned.
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Post by ReIncarnate »

major update on first post

and I'd like a bit of in-depth critiques if you guys don't mind (you don't have to do this as a favour, even if you guys scream and yell, I'm fine as long as it'll help me improve)
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Post by Homer »

This is alot better (color-wise) but still could just a tad more grey and on the new ship i really like the wings. Also the aegis effect on the bottom ship is interesting has a nice high intensity to low intensity transition.

Overall great job for a newby. :D
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Post by SHAD0Wdump »

A ship is not wank until it is nigh-indestructible.Being able to beat it with a Cronus proves that it is very likely balanced.
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