Imperator Pavel I's Ships

Imperator Pavel I · Post by **Imperator Pavel I** » Thu May 28, 2009 7:54 am

The Cinco De Mayo:

Non-combat form:

Assult form:

Note: backstory will come.
Pictures will not work.

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Thu May 28, 2009 8:36 am

Overall shape of the ship is ok. More use of color is needed but i don't think red looks good with green. For some reason the sections use looks sloppy on the first ship (second ship has decent section use).

Imperator Pavel I · Post by **Imperator Pavel I** » Thu May 28, 2009 9:59 am

I will edit the colors.

They are the same ship.

EDIT: It is a lot better than Bismarck.

Post by **Anna** » Thu May 28, 2009 10:27 am

Oh Jesus. Pavel, you are one fuckup away from being banned, do you understand? Stop posting worthless spam, stop making stupid, oversized text for no goddamn reason, and stop with the multicoloured text crap.

Or I will simply decide you aren't worth the bother.

Imperator Pavel I · Post by **Imperator Pavel I** » Fri May 29, 2009 4:44 am

OK, I'll edit my post

MelvinVm · Post by **MelvinVm** » Fri May 29, 2009 1:35 pm

The red looks out of place, totally.
Theres some asymmetry on the front that also looks out of place, and ugly.

jwa8402 · Post by **jwa8402** » Fri May 29, 2009 2:35 pm

I think I see what your trying to do here, and its not a bad idea. A non-combat form that goes to assault mode is always awesome. The problem is, it looks like your building the assault mode first then trying to squeeze all the sections into eachother for a non-combat mode. Try building the non-combat mode first then adding stuff on for assault expansion. That way you won't get pieces like the centerline that look mashed together.
Something like this:

I'm sure you can do alot more with this if you try harder. Consider making armor that appears to pop out during combat, bat-mobile or last season of voyager style.

Imperator Pavel I · Post by **Imperator Pavel I** » Sat May 30, 2009 5:05 am

Thanks for the advice, jwa8402.

What about this:

Non-combat form:

Transition III (Delta):

They are all the same ship.
The six demeters are going to be under the section they are on when it is finished.
EDIT: Would a blue-red color sceme be good?
Tell what color scheme is good, and I'll put it on there

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Sat May 30, 2009 6:20 am

Honestly, that actually looks cool except no color and cluttered sections. I especially like the TransitionIII

Kiltric · Post by **Kiltric** » Sat May 30, 2009 6:36 am

Very nice work on the transformation Pavel. I'll reserve complete judgment until I see how the colors pan out, but some of the sections are a bit overstretched. See where the outlines are blurrier and thicker than the other pieces?

Imperator Pavel I · Post by **Imperator Pavel I** » Sat May 30, 2009 9:15 am

I just can't think of a good color scheme.
Can someone suggest one?

This is what it looks like right now:

EDIT: The blue Ageis is a way to subdue the green.
In my opinion, it looks cool.

It's just taking a long time to load.

bien4500 · Post by **bien4500** » Sat May 30, 2009 9:47 am

It looks worse now. Fix the clutter and get rid of the Aegis. Do some proper coloring too.

Also, please do not invoke Seraph's wrath.

jwa8402 · Post by **jwa8402** » Sat May 30, 2009 12:05 pm

Thats the idea, yes. I am the last person to ask about color, but I did notice something about your section use. Right now a lot of your pieces don't go together or are not lined up. The idea is to create lines that flow so you don't feel like you are looking at a bunch of different sections tacked together. Using one piece for the entire outside is also ok if its done as ablative armor.

MelvinVm · Post by **MelvinVm** » Sat May 30, 2009 3:33 pm

don't use a large amount of detailed sections, I can bring you a color scheme if you need, PM me for that.
Aegis sucks here.
You are improving a bit, although very slowly.

Imperator Pavel I · Post by **Imperator Pavel I** » Sat May 30, 2009 9:54 pm

Ageis deleted.

Oh, and Seraph, how can I troll if I don't even know what trolling is.

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