My first attempt in making an awesome ship

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25000st
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My first attempt in making an awesome ship

Post by 25000st »

Hi. I'm new here (not in playing Battleships forever). I recently found this forum and saw the sweet looking ships. I tried making my own and failed. Don't know how you guys pull it off. Any how, what can I do to improve this ship?
Can't figure out how to post images. Take a look at http://southerngalactichq.jimdo.com/the ... tar-fleet/.
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Post by jwa8402 »

Welcome! You should preview your posts before you post them. You didn't put the actual link. Post it and you will get plenty of advise, I'm sure.
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Post by Commodore111 »

If you have google chrome you can use "copy image URL" and remove the dynamic tags at the end. Just use Image
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Post by Kiltric »

What exactly seems to be the trouble with your ship making efforts?
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Post by drekisol »

one thing you could do is not spam the section 22 they don't look good when there is more than 1 normaly

but i do like the ship overall. just a little nitpick i would like it better if the wings were a little bigger atm there a little to small for how long the ship is
also try hiding more of the guns so it dosnt look so weapon spammed.
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Post by Wicky_42 »

The wings are fine, but I agree with drekisol that spacing the cannons and concealing more of them would probably be a good idea.
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Post by 25000st »

i didn't change much but concealed a few guns.
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omfg! tags just don't seem to work. I also tried quoting. I don't know what's wrong

Thanks Exethalion. It works now.
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Post by drekisol »

i like that one better it looks better with the guns covered =) try to cover part of the stock 22s with some smaller detailed ones like a kae_sec15 for example makes it less spammie looking =)

but keep up the good work =)
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Post by Exethalion »

25000st wrote:omfg! tags just don't seem to work. I also tried quoting. I don't know what's wrong
Remove all the characters after .jpg. It's all meaningless. Therefore it should read:
http://southerngalactichq.jimdo.com/s/c ... 215519.jpg
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