Giant coming

ifelon · Post by **ifelon** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 4:35 pm

Nice to c u here!~~I'm a Chinese, also a fan of spaceship.
I've seen many cool ship here,so I have to say my "Pride" was gone.

I'm new comer i've to say.

this is my first work,it's HUGE,but I work for it a long time.I think is not unbalance...I just change some main weapon's state.

OK,I hope u just take a look ,if think it's stupid,just pass it

some setting I created for it:(My english is not good enough,maybe it's hard to understand...)

Name: A Halo
Class: Titan class Space motherships
Type: RainBow9000b

Main Hp: 377
Total HP: 65213.53
maxspeed: 200m/s
Turning: 0.30r/s
AI Range: 90km
Accel: 50g
Number of sections: 161
Number of weapons: 108
Number of modules: 37

[Major Weapon](Front/broadside/tail)
"Giant 3"NVIA5400 Range Enhanced Type 500km Customized version Plasma Ball Cannon X1
"Planet Mop-upper 2"LR190 Strenghthened Type Twin Beam Turret X2
"Cave"FLR150-H Shock Beamer X8

"Piano of Light"DFE280-SS Gatling Blaster X2

"Endless"oEK-i9 Vulcan Cannon X1

[Minor Weapon]
"Blue Sunrise" Twin Railgun X4
"Magic"Sabot Cannon X2
Quad Blaster X3
Twin Blaster X6
Scatter Beam X14
Mini-Missile Pack X4
"Hornets"class"Amonika"Demeter Launcher X8

[Defense System]
Point Beam X31
M.beam X12
Gatling Pulse Gun X6
Particle Gun X2
Machinegun X2

[Module](Thruster System/Fight add/Protect/other)
"Nutter3"KKST-300IB Strenghthened Type Mixed fuel Fusion Engine X1
"Nutter"GT-180IB Stable Type Hydrogen - Helium Tunrning Fusion Engine X2
"Herbrac"SD120K Dieterling Device X1

"Black Duke"MK16 "Hayabusa"Class"Bacrol"Demeter Launcher X2

"Milk 2"Aegis Deflector X2
"Lee"Rorschach Resistor X2
"Rainbow 2"10C-MS Deflector Shield X22

"Oak"Nano Matrix X2

The Halo was Designed as a surpply & defense basement,so it has not very much firepower,but it's defense capability was incredable!
(u could see that form its countless Deflector Shields and the 2 Aegis Deflectors)
So,without friendly assistance it's almost vulnerable.But with some help——even only from one small ship——The Halo will show it's evil side:)

Fighting with too many enemies (especially without help) is an unreasonable decision——even for a Titan class spaceship.

My Halo died...

Further infor:

“光晕”号被设计为一个可靠的防御体系，这也是“彩虹”系列的设计思想。
从武器性能就可以看出，除了“巨人”3定制版的牌子稍响一点，其余的武器对于一个泰坦级巡洋舰都不值一提。尤其是“光速钢琴”DFE280-SS爆弹炮，虽然以其著名的射程著称，但是爆弹炮在280km这个尺度上的命中率还值得考究。
所以“光晕”号并不是一艘载船+进攻的航天母舰。
除开进攻，“彩虹"系列的航天母舰一向在防御体系上极尽奢华，这一点从“光晕”号数量众多的无人机，全方位的点对点激光塔，多达22套的“彩虹2"10C-MS护盾发生器，两套浮云的“李”扭曲场发生器和浮云的“牛奶2”庇护盾（TWO!）都可以淋漓尽致地体现出来。而作用范围超远的“橡树”修复装置则可以为“光晕”号及友军提供持续的战斗力。
作为为友军提供后盾的“光晕”号，自身肯定也做足了防御准备。
核心部分一整圈的“彩虹2”DB-LS钛碳合金板的价值足以再造一艘裂谷级驱逐舰。在此基础上，两套强劲而脆弱（For sure it's dangerous
——if crash）的奇异子发动机（With the nickname“Odd Battery”）为耗能惊人的“牛奶2”庇护盾发生器提供了能源保障，同时也为高耗能的
"行星扫荡者2"激光炮提供直接能源支撑。（Beam badly needs e-）
为史诗级别的"疯狂3"KKST-300IB加强型混合燃料聚变推进器提供能量的是两座氢-氦聚变反应堆（这样就可以同时为转向推进器同时供能），但是轻聚变提供的能量有限，所以住推进器大部分的能量来自自带6门集束脉冲炮（Such luxury- -///）的“石头”LX-90000巨型固体燃料化学发动机。化学发动机需要携带的燃料那叫一个夸张，但是为了提供较高的（50g，想想吧，要给这个庞然大物以50g的加速度需要多大的推力？）活动性（而不是机动性）最终选择了化学发动机。因为虽然“光晕”号不太需要机动，但是需要能及时赶到。（跳跃发动机的意义就在于此）
9000b系列因为以光束武器（b short forbeam）为主要攻击手段，遇见具有扭曲场发生器的敌人（Itself have two- -///）就很难有效杀伤，这也说明了“彩虹”系列的设计思想：光束武器虽然混战中不是很讨好，但是却能提供最及时的火力援助和来犯拦截——毕竟光最快。
优势与不足：
优势：内圈采用性能优异价格奇高的“彩虹2”DB-LS合金板，外圈采用性价比优异的“彩虹”HT-C强化碳钢板，配合"彩虹2"10C-MS能量盾能有效抵抗大多数进攻。无懈可击的防御体系，密集的拦截火力和两套“牛奶2”庇护盾发生器使得即使是一整编队的大型舰船也很难直接攻破。一台跳跃发动机则更是锦上添花。
舰首的火力非常集中，能短时间内造成巨大的伤害。无人机众多，能提供连续不断的火力骚扰。
不足：虽然正面火力优秀，但是侧翼和舰尾的火力基本只能起到防御的作用，要想进攻那是力不从心。9000b系列普遍贫电，两块大“电池”虽然提供了强劲能量，但总归有安全隐患。主力火力过于集中会使受到围攻时大部分舰体处于0火力状况。
双圈“彩虹”系列防御板看起来很顽强，但是建造时内部结构不甚合理，一旦外部防御瓦解，舰体内部大量的能量输送管道会显得相当脆弱。侧翼防御板本身不足，又存在危险的侧向推进器，如果遭到重创可能会引起连环爆炸。

OK,my statment is over ,u can laugh now.

I'm VREY SORRY.
I'am a new comer who first log in an english BBS,that's why I know nothing about the rules...I'm SORRY.
Sorry for my huting ur eyes..

But I'll give something more interesting later!

(In this edition i delete 2 pictures:for good looking...)
THANKS again for all your advice!It makes my better performance...

guilee186 · Post by **guilee186** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 4:51 pm

那，太多颜色了，

There is too much of Aegis spam. Also tone down the colours. Glow is ugly , do try to cut down on the usage.

Nitpick; It isn't a circle.

Also, large weapons look ugly.

Warpman · Post by **Warpman** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:01 pm

Looks funny. But ,as already said, Aegis spam is bad.

ifelon · Post by **ifelon** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 5:34 pm

uh...it is ,I just want it looks bright,that why it calls Rainbow ,right?
Yes,big weapon...'cause I didn't do anything 4 them ,just press q and shift+q..ha..

uh...I aim 2 add more lively color 4 this cold space:)
Thanks 4 your advice!

Nutcase · Post by **Nutcase** » Tue Mar 31, 2009 9:12 pm

1st: Stop using numbers instead of words. It be bad. VERY BAD.
2nd: Don't resize sections and modules to have the average size of a Hestia. In fact even Zelus sized is way too much.
3rd: There should be a rule about shipbuilding under influence.Especially when there are mushrooms involved

Danny420Dale · Post by **Danny420Dale** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 12:16 am

It's called 'Pride' and shoots rainbows. I smell thinly veiled homophobia

Also, txtspk is REALLY FUCKING BAD and will instantly annihilate in a massive burst of 511kev gamma rays whatever modicum of respect we default to giving new arrivals. Thank you.

Verminator · Post by **Verminator** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 3:10 am

I'm in awe.

Not the good kind, but not the bad kind either. I just don't know what to say.

parameciumkid · Post by **parameciumkid** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:27 am

All I have to say is
A: Are you familiar with the fact that the immensely popular videogame Halo features a large ring-shaped ship called Halo?
B: Very bold color scheme you have going there. It takes either guts or foolishness to get away with a rainbow-colored ship.

Slayer0019 · Post by **Slayer0019** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 5:37 am

parameciumkid wrote:A: Are you familiar with the fact that the immensely popular videogame Halo features a large ring-shaped ship called Halo?

I'm calling you out on that. The rings are not ships. They are superweapons. Get it right. Also, it is not THE Halo, its A Halo. There are 7 (Or 8, technically, if you count the shield world/halo-under-construction you drive across at the end of halo 3).

As for the ship, some part of me really likes it, a lot. Then the shipbuilding half of my brain slaps it. Great concept, poor execution. Keep at it.

Singularity · Post by **Singularity** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 6:10 am

The internals are actually very nice for a station. But it looks nothing like a ship and aegis spam hurts my eyes.

Krishach · Post by **Krishach** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 12:48 pm

Would you please post a shipmaker shot, so we can accurately tell what in the f*%k just happened?

Thank you.

VNilla · Post by **VNilla** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:15 pm

If you do that Shipmaker screenshot, please do it at regular zoom (don't zoom in or out, just take the picture). Press the [Home] key to go to regular zoom if you aren't. (Then again, do Chinese keyboards even have [Home] keys?)

blackrider123 · Post by **blackrider123** » Wed Apr 01, 2009 8:28 pm

真的是太多颜色了！想法是很有趣，只是武器实在太显眼了！
*i suck in Chinese

really i feel that the idea for the ship is great and it looks like you really spend some effort on it. Its really weapon spam and they are a bit too obvious, try to hide them under turret sections. Since u just started BSF, you should make smaller ships first to brush up on your skills, then embark on bigger projects. Instead of using aegis deflectors, use fake aegis(are those bars between the aegis and the target?)