AD's cunning concepts: Adelaide class on page 11.
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You're seating the guns on the turrets improperly, AD. The barrels are meant to project much further out, though I could see that being a problem...
Also, suggest rotating the flags 180. Rotate, not flip. Alternately, flip both horizontally and vertically. They don't make any sense to an onlooker right now, as they're upside down!
Also, suggest rotating the flags 180. Rotate, not flip. Alternately, flip both horizontally and vertically. They don't make any sense to an onlooker right now, as they're upside down!
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If I put them farther out, they might extend over the hull when broadsiding, so I'd rather have the guns tucked in a bit.
@jwa: Those sections are secondary thrusters. I'll make it more visible by adding some engine glows.
EDIT: Flipped the flags, added exhaust glows and some extra heat dissipation doohickeys.
@jwa: Those sections are secondary thrusters. I'll make it more visible by adding some engine glows.
EDIT: Flipped the flags, added exhaust glows and some extra heat dissipation doohickeys.
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it would be kickass if those secondary thruster sections you added on the side rotated as the ship turns so the thruster module wouldn't stop firing. Maybe something linked. the flags are awesome and i like the sleek profile behind the shield. Might have replacable armor plates on the shield for when they get destroyed or is that too hard?
There is hardly anything I like about this ship. The section palette seems uninspired, even haphazard, and lends nothing to the design other than completing the overall penisbrick hullshape - which you tried to excuse with a strange hammerhead front capped by an ugly stock section. I... don't feel this. At all.
The look is extremely bland, there's hardly any eyecatches. Why go for a blue and gray colorscheme when red highlights or details could make it look SO much better? Atleast add a side sponson or two, get some rowed batteries on that thing, or use better sections for the turret clusters. Stock BSF sections do not carry a look on their own at this point. Get rid of that shit.
Add some red, swap some sections, and make the front more interesting. After the usual glow and doodad pimpin, maybe I would find it more loveable.
The look is extremely bland, there's hardly any eyecatches. Why go for a blue and gray colorscheme when red highlights or details could make it look SO much better? Atleast add a side sponson or two, get some rowed batteries on that thing, or use better sections for the turret clusters. Stock BSF sections do not carry a look on their own at this point. Get rid of that shit.
Add some red, swap some sections, and make the front more interesting. After the usual glow and doodad pimpin, maybe I would find it more loveable.
Nah, I tried that, it won't work.Raul wrote:it would be kickass if those secondary thruster sections you added on the side rotated as the ship turns so the thruster module wouldn't stop firing.
Thruster module thrust effect only counts its original placement and heading, so if you rotate it midgame, it still won't adjust the effect to its new facing.
Oh, and AD? Keep playing with the hull, there's still much potential you haven't drawn out yet. It's still messy in some places
Realism, seriously? It's a space ship game. Realism was thrown out the window a long time ago.
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@Cycerin; I wonder how a section palette could be uninspired, and haphazard isn't exactly a word I'd use either. I simply don't agree on your opinion about stock sections, they can be quite useful, such as a 22 can still be used for making flat gundecks. Though a turret mount for the bigger ones might not be a bad idea. Most of the smaller weapons haven't been added yet, so rowed batteries might happen. Side sponsons might as well, but I'm not sure where, how or why.
@Squishy: I'll see if I can clean it up a tad.
@Squishy: I'll see if I can clean it up a tad.
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Sorry for the doublepost, but MAJOR change here.
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Well. I wanted to say "Battlecruiser Operational" when I see the first half of the ship.
I have no idea wheter this one, or the previous one is better. However, the sidepods don't seem to be very functional to me.
I have no idea wheter this one, or the previous one is better. However, the sidepods don't seem to be very functional to me.
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Yep that ship looks like a beast, yet I feel that something is still missing from it.
Perhaps it could have something to do with the relatively straight side pods or something. I am not too sure.
The colors are certainly a drastic change, but does not look or feel like a ship that sails the red white and blue. I have no ideas on that regard, its purely up to you on that one.
Still its a pretty awesome vessel. Nice job!
Perhaps it could have something to do with the relatively straight side pods or something. I am not too sure.
The colors are certainly a drastic change, but does not look or feel like a ship that sails the red white and blue. I have no ideas on that regard, its purely up to you on that one.
Still its a pretty awesome vessel. Nice job!
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I like the newest one, and the first one, which had the WF sections. The middle one was awful.
Though like Darkship said, something feels off/missing.
Could you perhaps try incorporating a type of blue into the ship along with the dark red, even if it is very subtle? Perhaps beef up/fiddle around with the side pods too?
Though like Darkship said, something feels off/missing.
Could you perhaps try incorporating a type of blue into the ship along with the dark red, even if it is very subtle? Perhaps beef up/fiddle around with the side pods too?
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I'm still finishing the RTN, this is just an intermezzo. A herald for things to come. Any thoughts?
I'm still finishing the RTN, this is just an intermezzo. A herald for things to come. Any thoughts?
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