brand new shipS !

otocar91 · Post by **otocar91** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:42 am

give me some constructive criticism please

here is a bigger picture:

in action:

Neroman · Post by **Neroman** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:51 am

1. The colors are a bit conflicting

2. The back straight piece is too stretched

Overall its pretty good.

IBurn36360 · Post by **IBurn36360** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 10:52 am

I'd strongly suggest using Photobucket.

From what I've been able to see, your ship has a good looking shape and overall, a good use of colours. I'll need to see a better picture in order to make a full judgement.

Krishach · Post by **Krishach** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 12:51 pm

imageshack is fine, just A) never use the thumbnails, and B) never use the /url code. But they'll stay up for practically ever.

DoomBringer · Post by **DoomBringer** » Fri Feb 20, 2009 9:06 pm

never use the thumbnails

I agree its hard to see and a bigger better picture would attract a bigger crowd. can't comment yet not so clear Ill wait for a better image first.

Edit: color is epic ......F.A.I.L red + green = Christmas tree or puke try grey plus green or green and brown but never red.

MelvinVm · Post by **MelvinVm** » Sat Feb 21, 2009 2:46 am

Second ship = quite decent for a start, but the colors keep burning my eyes.
And at the autocannons on the front, are those very stretched sections?
Stretching sections like that, is buttugly