I try again!!

Bionic-01 · Post by **Bionic-01** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 7:55 am

Hi, you maybe know my first job for BF, UN Spacy Fleet, well, I compare my designs in battle.
The other user designs are very agresive and have most dangerous weapons:
3rd_generation_Midgard
3rd_gen_retrofits
Official_Ships
Aeterna_001
Eccelia_CA_v1.0
Trident_BS_v1.0
Fort_Mesopotamia_v1.0
Zeus

This last, with a poor design like my fleet, but a powerfull shield transform this stupid colossus in a challenge.
These and other designs make me decide to rebuilt my ships and agree a fighter, now the project is in beta fase, here a shoot:

The project is already very soon.

DoubleThink · Post by **DoubleThink** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:00 am

No offense, but: http://esl.about.com/

It's a dangerous world. You'll need it.

As to the ships, too much Aegis, and too many weapons. The overall shape isn't great, and they're just plain ugly.

Lizzie · Post by **Lizzie** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:03 am

The ship on the far right would look a whole hell lot better if you didn't attach every weapon on it to a booster. If you give me the SB3 I might be willing to re-wire it for you.

lightstriker · Post by **lightstriker** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:03 am

...what?.
as for the ships- the second one's shape is the best, by far (although still not great). the others suffer from the usual problems (weapon spam, aegis spam, blocky-ness, etc.) but that's pretty common for beginners. Tone down the number of weapons.

Basically, i would recommend the usual newbie spiel- look at the moderators ships (and other people with lots of good comments, Darkship or Water and Wind are great examples) for examples of what looks good and what doesn't. Read the stickied topics, especially the ones about how to make ships and the like.

In any case, welcome to the forums, enjoy your stay.
and English isn't your first language, is it?

Himura.Kenshin · Post by **Himura.Kenshin** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 8:38 am

He used a translator

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bien4500 · Post by **bien4500** » Sun Sep 14, 2008 10:28 am

They kinda remind me of my first ships. Ugly Aegis whores. Too many weapons. Try taking a look at other's fleets.

Nabaco · Post by **Nabaco** » Mon Sep 15, 2008 6:29 am

Show us the blueprints...also known as the SB3s...(For some reason I imagine parenting problems) I liked the first ship hehe.

T-002 · Post by **T-002** » Tue Sep 16, 2008 7:47 pm

Himura.Kenshin wrote:He used a translator .

At least he bothered. Some people here just don't have any shame.

Bionic-01 · Post by **Bionic-01** » Mon Sep 22, 2008 8:35 am

Well, well, well, critics and suggestions are welcome to me, and yes, english is not my first or second language, but you try follow the instructions in russian, portuguese, german or spanish without reference in english, easy eh?.
The forum no have (or get) section for other language like others forums and my english is very, very bad or poor, sorry for that.
So my desings are too bad, like my english, well I don't have much time for making a ship and I need your help and the personal opinion is just I need, Thanks for the welcome LightStriker and all you for help me.
ahh, I cancel the project but I work in other.

:twisted: :twisted: :twisted:

Nabaco · Post by **Nabaco** » Mon Sep 22, 2008 11:18 am

Droid wrote: Ugh. Hideously overstretched weapons/sections.

Oh ya...why did you steal my topic's name? >.>

Post by **Arcalane** » Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:14 pm

He made it a week before yours, dumbass, so shut up.

Nabaco · Post by **Nabaco** » Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:19 pm

Hm. Well for some unknown reason I can't remember this topic's name being "I try again!!!"...then again I can't even remember what this topic used to be called >.< Ignore this post.

Post by **Arcalane** » Mon Sep 22, 2008 12:42 pm

It's always been called what it's called now.

Gkug · Post by **Gkug** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 1:02 am

On the new ship the streched weapons look out of place.

ArcaneDude · Post by **ArcaneDude** » Tue Sep 23, 2008 1:07 am

It's far better than the previous attempt, but I suggest you remove (or shrink) the huge mining beams. They look ugly, to be honest. Also, the stretching on the front section 05's should be removed. Just use several sections to get the same overall shape.