AppAzi's ships

AppAziplock · Post by **AppAziplock** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:37 am

hello,
thees are my first set of ships i put on the forum.

Correct please, tell me if I'm doing wrong, and how to improve!
bye!

And, i'm back, with more ships!
theese ships use Japanese mythology names
1st: the Amatserasu!

2nd: the Onamuji

3rd: the Orochi

4th: the Tsukuyomi

and 5th, but certainly not least: the Yomi

i know, the last one isn't very heavily armed, but 1 plan on fixing that.

until next time, bye!!!

LordGarcia · Post by **LordGarcia** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:42 am

Hey! welcome to the forums. I hope you enjoy your stay.

those aren't bad for starters. Those aren't bad at all IMO. I'd fiddle a bith with the color cheme. However I specially like that single ship (the that's only once in the screenshot) and I think it wouls also work the other way around, with the wings facing forward (assuming it's facing to the bottom right)

Ai_512 · Post by **Ai_512** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:48 am

The front of the green ship could use some work, maybe widen the nose and blend it in a bit better.

Blackhart · Post by **Blackhart** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:32 am

Hello and welcome to the forums!

Your ships are pretty good for beginner ships. Out of all of them I like the small arrow head like one with the 4 missile launchers. It looks good, and its simple.

One of the only major problems I can spot is the weapon cluster on the nose of the green ships. Maybe you can spread the weapons out a bit or remove half of them and upgrade the ones you already have on their.

Good luck on future ship building

AppAziplock · Post by **AppAziplock** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:32 am

thanks guys!

Droid · Post by **Droid** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 7:36 am

Color your aegis to match your colorscheme

. Almost anything looks better than pure white.

But yeah, these aren't bad.

DeathsHand · Post by **DeathsHand** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 8:20 am

I must say, I like the ships with the section 9s connecting to the engines. Very good all around, there is little I can pick at that others haven't already pointed out...

Dagger · Post by **Dagger** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 10:42 am

Very nice ships overall. I like them alot. Just one question though.. I notice that all of them sport either a Gluon Bolter or a Lancet beam, or both. Are the Gluon Bolters upgraded stat wise somehow? Or are they stock as is.. Because I think some of those models would look great with Gravitic Impeders or Graviton Beams on.. (sorry, BIG fan of Gravitech here lol). But everything is great as is none the less.

bien4500 · Post by **bien4500** » Fri Aug 22, 2008 6:04 pm

There is a mirroring error (Actually it's four) on the back of the ship with section 9's connecting the back of the engine. And don't aegis the core unless the Aegis Generators can be shot out without using Aegis Breaker weapons (Lucky 9's, uberhighdamagemodded weapons and other crap.). And as advised recolor the Aegis, change your color scheme too.

AppAziplock · Post by **AppAziplock** » Sat Aug 23, 2008 1:50 am

Thank you everybody, I will take your advice for future ships, thanks again.

Dessel Ordo · Post by **Dessel Ordo** » Sun Aug 24, 2008 1:42 am

They look pretty good, but I am more interested in how they fight/balance, DL?

it looks like you only need to shift the mirror-errored peices a pixel or two to fix your problem (I've had to do that alot to, but it aint to tough to pull off)

can't wait to see the fleet expanded/play against it!!

AppAziplock · Post by **AppAziplock** » Tue Aug 26, 2008 11:34 am

WHY IS NO ONE POSTING!!!!!

Blackhart · Post by **Blackhart** » Tue Aug 26, 2008 11:48 am

AppAziplock wrote: WHY IS NO ONE POSTING!!!!!

Don't worry about it, these kind of things require patience.

Anyway the ships look pretty good, all I really have to say is to get rid of all the aegis on the Tsukuyomi, it makes it look like an ugly blur. Also shorten the arm length on the Yomi, it will make it look less funky.

Out of the five ships I would have to say the Onamuji and the Orochi look the best.

Good luck on future ship building my friend.

oh and also use less weapons on you ships

Lizzie · Post by **Lizzie** » Tue Aug 26, 2008 11:51 am

AppAziplock wrote: WHY IS NO ONE POSTING!!!!!

There's a lot of things I can say to this. I'll just settle for the following:
We ain't your peons. Thus we are not entitled to post in this thread whenever you want us to.

kthxbai

AppAziplock · Post by **AppAziplock** » Wed Aug 27, 2008 5:02 am

thanks again blackhart and sorry liz, no offence meant!!!!