Gri'ortis Me'kia Fighter ship.
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Gri'ortis Me'kia Fighter ship.
I just wanted to see if the color scheme was good, it looks a little off... But it kinda looks good, but im taking any suggestions. I havent placed weapons yet (as you can tell in the image below.) im also taking suggestions on that also.
May i present the Gri'ortis Me'kia
May i present the Gri'ortis Me'kia
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To be fair, it's not very good methinks. I think it would be better with something in the way of a rust brown/copper color, but now it looks...bad. It's also a bit frail, as others have said, and I don't like the repetition in the central part.
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I like the general outline. It would be better if the core were moved back into the main body and the wings were better connected. It also looks messy in spots and the repitition is bad.
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Better. But to be fair the ship's shape and section use aren't very appealing altogether. It's a bit...amateuristic, to be bold.
EDIT; the core is also WAY too far to the front.
EDIT; the core is also WAY too far to the front.
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You could probably use less pieces and theres some layering issues that would improve the look as well...
As for coloring I don't care for too many of the colors so I usually go with that grey + highlights of the fleet colors...
As for weapons, obviously there will be either beams or demeters on the wings depending on whether its a carrier or attack ship. Tthe neck is prime realistate for a spinal cannon. Perhaps missles or sidewinders on the wing struts?
I see what your trying to do, and I also see why the others are calling it bad. However I'm not sure what your actually capable of, so no amount of bashing will make it better if thats the best you can do.
As for coloring I don't care for too many of the colors so I usually go with that grey + highlights of the fleet colors...
As for weapons, obviously there will be either beams or demeters on the wings depending on whether its a carrier or attack ship. Tthe neck is prime realistate for a spinal cannon. Perhaps missles or sidewinders on the wing struts?
I see what your trying to do, and I also see why the others are calling it bad. However I'm not sure what your actually capable of, so no amount of bashing will make it better if thats the best you can do.
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