Hunter Fleet

JaffaJoke91 · Post by **JaffaJoke91** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:06 pm

I have been off line for a while, so i am a bit rusty. can i get some opinions on my ship?

Averam · Post by **Averam** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:10 pm

Nice design, colours look good, but I take it this is a WIP as there's no guns on it? And personally, I'd have the core under the middle rear section, not the front section.

JaffaJoke91 · Post by **JaffaJoke91** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:13 pm

it is a WIP, and i need to recolor. but as far as the shape goes, how is it?

Perturabo · Post by **Perturabo** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:36 pm

I'd say the outline is good, but it's kind of formless. It seems like you just put a bunch of parts together to make the outline work.

Averam · Post by **Averam** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 10:41 pm

I personally like the shape, although I do kinda agree with Perturabo - it looks like you've overused some parts just to fill in space. Maybe redesign using less pieces, with some resizing.

On an unrelated note, your ship reminds me of something. I swear I've seen it somewhere else, in a game/film/tv show, but for the life of me, I can't think where.

Venator · Post by **Venator** » Mon Apr 14, 2008 11:15 pm

Averam wrote:I personally like the shape, although I do kinda agree with Perturabo - it looks like you've overused some parts just to fill in space. Maybe redesign using less pieces, with some resizing.

I'm thinking a section 26 in the rear rather than some of the central jumble?

The ship does have a very nice, contoured form, though.

bien4500 · Post by **bien4500** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:16 am

Make it have spikes coming out of the center, in a thin line from front to back, wait, did you mean 'Hunter Fleet' as in 'Lekgolo Fleet'? As in after the Covenant split up. If not ignore what I just said.

Perturabo · Post by **Perturabo** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:51 am

Klingon Warship. I knew it looked familiar!

JaffaJoke91 · Post by **JaffaJoke91** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 12:54 am

no, that's not it... any way, here is an update of the messy jumble, recolor next.

Perturabo · Post by **Perturabo** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:06 am

I wasn't saying that's what you tried to make, that's just what it reminds me of. Anyway, good job on weapon placement, it doesn't look wanky. Looking forward to the recolor.

T-002 · Post by **T-002** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:34 am

ITACHIIIIIII!! *squeal*

Hrmm, yeah. Give it a Megabeamer in the middle of the big maw-thing. So it can go OM NOM NOM mouth-laser.

Averam · Post by **Averam** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 1:40 am

Nope, also not what it reminds me of. Starting to bug me now lol.

derekiv · Post by **derekiv** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 2:25 am

If it is based on the Halo hunters, you didn't do your research:
THEY DON"T HAVE SPACEFARING VESSELS!

They trade their military expertise for Covenant space passage.

T-002 · Post by **T-002** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 2:44 am

derekiv wrote:If it is based on the Halo hunters, you didn't do your research:
THEY DON"T HAVE SPACEFARING VESSELS!

They trade their military expertise for Covenant space passage.

It has been said before, and Jaffa said that wasn't it. So, basically, what you did here was take a shout at someone based on what, a gut feeling? You might want to save the caps until you're certain. Actually, it'd be better if you didn't use them at all, thank you.

Dammit, people. Not everything redirects to Halo.

JaffaJoke91 · Post by **JaffaJoke91** » Tue Apr 15, 2008 3:19 am

the bottom line, no halo, no star trek, it is original. people are so effin stupid.

here is my recolor, and it should be final unless there are several problems.