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my ship
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii25 ... reen01.jpg
i am new to the forums and kindda new to the ship builder but in a fleet i am trying to make this one i call the/a Hygareis BattleCruiser
please post any thing you find wrong with it so i can make it better:)
i am new to the forums and kindda new to the ship builder but in a fleet i am trying to make this one i call the/a Hygareis BattleCruiser
please post any thing you find wrong with it so i can make it better:)
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Regarding your ship..
There is too much repetition.. It needs variety.
Also, do you know what Aegis Deflectors do?They're systems that generate a SHIELD around a section. should'nt the targeted section be further out?(unless the aegis was decorative.) Don't use to much aegis deflectors cause your ship will become an aegis whore(and thats not a good thing.)
Regarding your ship..
There is too much repetition.. It needs variety.
Also, do you know what Aegis Deflectors do?They're systems that generate a SHIELD around a section. should'nt the targeted section be further out?(unless the aegis was decorative.) Don't use to much aegis deflectors cause your ship will become an aegis whore(and thats not a good thing.)
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The Aegis on this ship seems well placed, although the back is a bit...empty. I suggest adding a few more weapons, and maybe toy around with the colours a bit. Quite good for a first try though.
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thanks
i am always kindda heavy on the agis but this ship was mostly for looks but
this will be a good lesson for me. so by repition you mean the 3 forward/back facing sides that stick out? and the kinndda same main hull pattern?
iam goina start on a new one soon while i fix this one up with your guys help.
i am always kindda heavy on the agis but this ship was mostly for looks but
this will be a good lesson for me. so by repition you mean the 3 forward/back facing sides that stick out? and the kinndda same main hull pattern?
iam goina start on a new one soon while i fix this one up with your guys help.
Pretty much. The Aegis plating is... different, but to my mind it kind of spoils the appearance since the shielded plates overlay the normal ones. By that token, the nose looks good but the rear points are... messy.reven1231 wrote:so by repition you mean the 3 forward/back facing sides that stick out? and the kinndda same main hull pattern?
Also, your weapons are somewhat over-stacked; consider spacing them out.
The basic hull has a nice shape to it, though.
[url=http://www.wyrdysm.com/phpBB2/viewtopic.php?t=2921][img]http://i30.photobucket.com/albums/c348/DraTuicichNovae/AESig.png[/img][/url]
i changed some of the the colors around a bit and added a few weapons in the aft section, so it looks better now but i go this why i tried to run a sandbox game with it.
ERROR in
action number 1
of Create Event
for object __newobject813:
In script nSec:
Error in code at line 29:
l_section[j].l_colour = global.colour[round((l_colour mod 1) * 10),argument7];
at position 73: Negative array index
can any one help with this?
ERROR in
action number 1
of Create Event
for object __newobject813:
In script nSec:
Error in code at line 29:
l_section[j].l_colour = global.colour[round((l_colour mod 1) * 10),argument7];
at position 73: Negative array index
can any one help with this?
ok, thanks guys
heres a re done model
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii25 ... reen00.jpg
i don't know much of anything to add to it now so i will start on a new ship
soon
heres a re done model
http://i266.photobucket.com/albums/ii25 ... reen00.jpg
i don't know much of anything to add to it now so i will start on a new ship
soon