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*ker-bump*
New concept:
ACSS Maelstrom - Unique Arcanity Corporate Security Strike Carrier
The flagship of AHE's corporate security branch, the Maelstrom is usually hired when another large corporation or nation cannot provide it's own defense, but requiresprotection from level 1 pirate threads, invasion, or civil war. It's incredible size and firepower make Maelstrom the ultimate mercenary force, but it comes at an astronomically large cost. Many institutions will be just as ravaged from paying it's loan as from weathering the attack themselves, but at least they'll be alive.
New concept:
ACSS Maelstrom - Unique Arcanity Corporate Security Strike Carrier
The flagship of AHE's corporate security branch, the Maelstrom is usually hired when another large corporation or nation cannot provide it's own defense, but requiresprotection from level 1 pirate threads, invasion, or civil war. It's incredible size and firepower make Maelstrom the ultimate mercenary force, but it comes at an astronomically large cost. Many institutions will be just as ravaged from paying it's loan as from weathering the attack themselves, but at least they'll be alive.
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Something I've noticed is that the largest wings kind of violate the style of this fleet, in that they change angle halfway through. This goes against the 'wings radiating straight outwards from the core' theme you had going.
The section use of the wings themselves though, and the body of the ship, is IMO, excellent.
The section use of the wings themselves though, and the body of the ship, is IMO, excellent.
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The back of the ship needs work, yeah. Specifically the launch systems and engines. The wing's angle shift may need to be less pronounced.
@Melv: the ship will be armed with strikecraft (interceptors, fighters, torpedo bombers and maybe even gunships, it's a big ship), long range anti-capital torpedoes, some light and medium beams and your mandatory peashooter. I may even devise a new offensive flak system for it, one that doesn't make such a noise as the tacnuke does.
@Melv: the ship will be armed with strikecraft (interceptors, fighters, torpedo bombers and maybe even gunships, it's a big ship), long range anti-capital torpedoes, some light and medium beams and your mandatory peashooter. I may even devise a new offensive flak system for it, one that doesn't make such a noise as the tacnuke does.
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And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
Check out the Epic Music Library
And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
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Bump:
Forgot to save it, but I'll just use this as a refpic to rebuild it. Opinions?
Forgot to save it, but I'll just use this as a refpic to rebuild it. Opinions?
Check out The Star Wreck project!
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And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
Check out the Epic Music Library
And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
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It may be just me, but I liked the version with the angled wings more. Now it reminds me too much of a snowflake. The slight difference in angle between the front and back wings (they don't line up) also is more pronounced now. In the previous version, the back wings didn't point at the core as much, and I liked that more. Now it seems to be built for aesthetics only while the 'bended' one looked more combat ready.
Other areas have been improved, though. The glow in the back section is a nice addition, as are the lights at the front wingtips.
Of course, it still is a really nice ship, but I don't think this version is much of an improvement.
Other areas have been improved, though. The glow in the back section is a nice addition, as are the lights at the front wingtips.
Of course, it still is a really nice ship, but I don't think this version is much of an improvement.
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IT'S A SHARP SNOWFLAKE THAT WILL SLICE YOUR THROAT
Srsly, even if it's a snowflake/ ice crystal, those things look good.
The wing angles could use *some* cleanup, but it's not exactly a priority.
@Dan: one of your flash sprites, actually.
Srsly, even if it's a snowflake/ ice crystal, those things look good.
The wing angles could use *some* cleanup, but it's not exactly a priority.
@Dan: one of your flash sprites, actually.
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And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
Check out the Epic Music Library
And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
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The intake-like wingbreak looks so awkward to me. But other than that, it is truly a deadly snowflake.
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It's not really an intake <_<
I'm gonna put the hangars there.
I'm gonna put the hangars there.
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And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
Check out the Epic Music Library
And in this Alliance we bestow our hope and will, that the Dogs of War may never harass the people of our homes again, and that it will bring peace, equality and liberty for all in need and despair. One Universe, One Goal. By the Manifest we command this.~ Saren Vil Ush
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