Midori no Kyojin
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Midori no Kyojin
The Midori no Kyojin. This is probably about my 7th or 8th attempt to make a ship. I came up with this. What should i fix? The back-story is up to you guys (in the poll).
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They do not get generic, you're right. They're ALWAYS generic.MelvinVm wrote:Penisbricks do not get generic, never say that again.
This ship is just bad, though. It'd be much better without the bright green outline, however. And the three background story options are equally lame, cliched and silly.
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Wait, what?maarten wrote:I like it, atleast it isn't one of those penisbricks that start getting very generic with melv and AD posting.
The main problem with this ship is the outline. The massive blue core could use a different, more subtle colour too. The ship itself isn't particularily horrid, but some of the section usage could use some work. A tip is to use less of the detailed sections on top.
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Removed the outline you guys thought was ridiculous. I also made a subtle section change.
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Quoted for truth. There's nothing glaringly shitty about this ship except for the black ring sections just in front of the wings. Could probably use a couple fewer detailed sections, though.ragamor wrote:Not everyone has a penis ship fetish I think it's nice with a non generic ship shape for once.The ship could be a bit thinner.
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Violets are blue,
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The truth indeed.ragamor wrote:Mush better without the outline.
Not everyone has a penis ship fetish I think it's nice with a non generic ship shape for once.The ship could be a bit thinner.
I guess it actually looks better with the outline. And this ship is way better then those by AD and melv. Although that's personal taste.
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Your personal taste can quite frankly kiss my ass. I hate to sound like an arrogant prick, but this isn't "way better" than Melv's recent work, or mine for that matter. You're pulling ridiculous nonsense out of you ass. That, or your taste is miserable.maarten wrote:And this ship is way better then those by AD and melv. Although that's personal taste.
If the remaining issues relayed before were to be adressed, this ship has quite some potential, though. I don't really think it needs to be thinner.
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Not surprised you like it, considering how roadkill-like the section usage is in some places. No matter how old the Orbital Swiss Army Knife crap gets, there is very little that can be seen here that is more aesthetically pleasing than AD's or Melv's work, what with the lack of attention to the level of detail and all. In other words, either my personal taste beats your personal taste with a stick, or you're trolling like a pissdrinking hatfucker.maarten wrote:The truth indeed.ragamor wrote:Mush better without the outline.
Not everyone has a penis ship fetish I think it's nice with a non generic ship shape for once.The ship could be a bit thinner.
I guess it actually looks better with the outline. And this ship is way better then those by AD and melv. Although that's personal taste.
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Violets are blue,
I'll fuck you with a rake.[/quote]
Violets are blue,
I'll fuck you with a rake.[/quote]