Midori no Kyojin

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What should this ships back-story be?

A giant warship that protects earth.
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A mysterious ship that has been reported to appear all over the galaxy. It causes devastation for ships near it.
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An alien ship that prevents passage of earth ships to somewhere.
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Midori no Kyojin

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The Midori no Kyojin. This is probably about my 7th or 8th attempt to make a ship. I came up with this. What should i fix? The back-story is up to you guys (in the poll).
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Post by Arcalane »

That bright outline, to be frank, is awful.

Now that I'm done being Frank (sorry Frank), it's okay, I guess. Not particularly astounding but I've seen worse, that kinda thing.
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Post by maarten »

I like it, atleast it isn't one of those penisbricks that start getting very generic with melv and AD posting.
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Post by MelvinVm »

Penisbricks do not get generic, never say that again.

This ship, uhm well..the outlining is more than horrible, scrap it, over ship colors are fine, but some glowy outlining should be scrapped.
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Post by Anna »

MelvinVm wrote:Penisbricks do not get generic, never say that again.
They do not get generic, you're right. They're ALWAYS generic.

This ship is just bad, though. It'd be much better without the bright green outline, however. And the three background story options are equally lame, cliched and silly.
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Post by Squishy »

Remove the outline, then post a larger screenshot so we can take a closer look and perhaps provide better feedback.
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maarten wrote:I like it, atleast it isn't one of those penisbricks that start getting very generic with melv and AD posting.
Wait, what?

The main problem with this ship is the outline. The massive blue core could use a different, more subtle colour too. The ship itself isn't particularily horrid, but some of the section usage could use some work. A tip is to use less of the detailed sections on top.
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Removed the outline you guys thought was ridiculous. I also made a subtle section change.

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Post by MelvinVm »

The ship could be a bit thinner.
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Post by ragamor »

Mush better without the outline.
The ship could be a bit thinner.
Not everyone has a penis ship fetish :D I think it's nice with a non generic ship shape for once.
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Post by EriErin »

ragamor wrote:
The ship could be a bit thinner.
Not everyone has a penis ship fetish :D I think it's nice with a non generic ship shape for once.
Quoted for truth. There's nothing glaringly shitty about this ship except for the black ring sections just in front of the wings. Could probably use a couple fewer detailed sections, though.
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Post by maarten »

ragamor wrote:Mush better without the outline.
The ship could be a bit thinner.
Not everyone has a penis ship fetish :D I think it's nice with a non generic ship shape for once.
The truth indeed.

I guess it actually looks better with the outline. And this ship is way better then those by AD and melv. Although that's personal taste.
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maarten wrote:And this ship is way better then those by AD and melv. Although that's personal taste.
Your personal taste can quite frankly kiss my ass. I hate to sound like an arrogant prick, but this isn't "way better" than Melv's recent work, or mine for that matter. You're pulling ridiculous nonsense out of you ass. That, or your taste is miserable.

If the remaining issues relayed before were to be adressed, this ship has quite some potential, though. I don't really think it needs to be thinner.
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Post by MelvinVm »

And this ship is way better then those by AD and melv. Although that's personal taste.
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other than that, this ship is decent, less outlining, a thinner shape, but not too thin, with thin, I don't mean my shapes.
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Post by EriErin »

maarten wrote:
ragamor wrote:Mush better without the outline.
The ship could be a bit thinner.
Not everyone has a penis ship fetish :D I think it's nice with a non generic ship shape for once.
The truth indeed.

I guess it actually looks better with the outline. And this ship is way better then those by AD and melv. Although that's personal taste.
Not surprised you like it, considering how roadkill-like the section usage is in some places. No matter how old the Orbital Swiss Army Knife crap gets, there is very little that can be seen here that is more aesthetically pleasing than AD's or Melv's work, what with the lack of attention to the level of detail and all. In other words, either my personal taste beats your personal taste with a stick, or you're trolling like a pissdrinking hatfucker.
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