Titan Heavy Engineering
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Titan Heavy Engineering
New ship by Titan Heavy Engineering
*NEW*
Seker Battlecruiser
EDITED
*OLD*
Osirus-Class Battleship
Ammit Mk II
Sekhmet
I kinda feel like an idiot for not knowing about the ~ button's function...
I'm going to give the Blue ones a second go.
Aeon
Epitaph
Epoch
*NEW*
Seker Battlecruiser
EDITED
*OLD*
Osirus-Class Battleship
Ammit Mk II
Sekhmet
I kinda feel like an idiot for not knowing about the ~ button's function...
I'm going to give the Blue ones a second go.
Aeon
Epitaph
Epoch
Last edited by Battle Titan on Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:36 am, edited 5 times in total.
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These ships honestly don't look good.
They suffer from the following problems:
-Repetition: The same section is used too many times. Try using different sections and resizing/flipping sections to achieve what you want. But don't stretch a section too much or it'll become pixelated and distorted.
-Monochrome: The color scheme is too simple on the blue ships, they need some variation. The Ammit is an improvement, though. Try using different shades to create an illusion of depth.
-Spam: Although the weapons are well-placed and in decent quantity, there are way too many thrusters. Also try depthing and recoloring the weapons.
Also try using custom sections and special effects to exploit the capabilities of ShipMaker 4. Lurk around and look at others' work, and improve your own.
They suffer from the following problems:
-Repetition: The same section is used too many times. Try using different sections and resizing/flipping sections to achieve what you want. But don't stretch a section too much or it'll become pixelated and distorted.
-Monochrome: The color scheme is too simple on the blue ships, they need some variation. The Ammit is an improvement, though. Try using different shades to create an illusion of depth.
-Spam: Although the weapons are well-placed and in decent quantity, there are way too many thrusters. Also try depthing and recoloring the weapons.
Also try using custom sections and special effects to exploit the capabilities of ShipMaker 4. Lurk around and look at others' work, and improve your own.
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They look nice, the green and grey is definitely better than the blue. I can't say much other than what Skrim summed up, but I think you got something going there. The shapes are nice and original.
They look nice, the green and grey is definitely better than the blue. I can't say much other than what Skrim summed up, but I think you got something going there. The shapes are nice and original.
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- Posts: 44
- Joined: Mon Mar 30, 2009 12:26 am
- Location: Interhell, a place where time has no meaning.
- Battle Titan
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- Joined: Mon Mar 30, 2009 12:26 am
- Location: Interhell, a place where time has no meaning.
Oh wo, this new ship is nice not much complaints except that missile launchers would look better if they were depthed IMO. And the wings need a little section work kinda messy.
Last edited by Homer on Mon Jul 13, 2009 9:15 am, edited 2 times in total.
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The area I outlined in this picture looks messy and in need of cleanup. The weapon on the placement on the rear also seems rather haphazard, the missile racks and the starboard and port Scatter Beams and Twin Blaster look especially mis-placed.
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