My First attempt at a Titan / Leviathan / Behemoth

Deltaflyer · Post by **Deltaflyer** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:16 pm

Whatever you want to call it, here it is:

Rear:

Front:

Full:

Please comment and rate.

jwa8402 · Post by **jwa8402** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 2:58 pm

wow

that is damned impressive! Not particularly my style just cuz its alittle thin on the main hull for how long it is... but from what I can tell you avoided filling in areas with random sections. After that, titan building is mainly personal preference.

The outlining effect really does it for me though. Almost reminds me of some of Anty's(I think) ships, or Rauls. Very nicely done. But wheres the eye lazor beams? If I had to change anything I would make the engines beefier, do something interesting with the tail, and clean up the front 'claws' a bit... I could see you doing a mir vessel... :twisted:

Kanosint · Post by **Kanosint** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 7:59 pm

I must say, that IS impressive. Good job, I can only say that the struts (especially the second and last, starting from the prow to the rear) look a bit too thin... Still, wow, it's a beauty :3

Deltaflyer · Post by **Deltaflyer** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 10:58 pm

Okay, Ill try to beef it up a bit.

Shogoll · Post by **Shogoll** » Mon Oct 13, 2008 11:20 pm

Not bad at all.

I dislike some of the skeletalness, and the gratuitous outlining. Quite frankly I think outlining should be used more sparingly, because when the inside is dark and excessive outlining is used, it makes the ship look silly. It's pretty good, though I'm not so sure about the sudden change from angles to curves near the front.

Deltaflyer · Post by **Deltaflyer** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:17 am

Okay, I have beefed it up and given it a sortof old, dead and menacing look. Will post the pics ASAP.

Deltaflyer · Post by **Deltaflyer** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 1:01 am

(note: not outlined yet. It will take me AGES to outline this bloody thing... lol)

Comment and rate please. I still have the old version to revert back to so this is a test version just to see what its like now

The Panzerschreck · Post by **The Panzerschreck** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 2:49 am

i like this way more! now it looks like a big nasty ship of doom

the only detail bothering me are the engines, they aren't ugly, but just seem a little to week for such a big ship (in my opninion)

Kanosint · Post by **Kanosint** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 3:07 am

Hot ship... Looks a bit organic now, too... Somehow ^^;

DeathsHand · Post by **DeathsHand** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 3:12 am

Awesome! It reminds me a bit of fusite's obsidian ships, melded together with the THV. You haven't joined the THV, now have you, Deltaflyer ?

Exethalion · Post by **Exethalion** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 3:40 am

Quite impressive but the huge areas of empty space need to have something on them, even if it's a few mounted weapons.

Deltaflyer · Post by **Deltaflyer** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:24 pm

What is the THV?

Master Chief · Post by **Master Chief** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:46 pm

Could use a little colour variation on the hull. As of now it's this huge hunk of gray. Kind of boring.

Deltaflyer · Post by **Deltaflyer** » Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:21 pm

I am currently working on outlining it. Also, I will begin to highlight the innards. Thanks for the thought, MC.

Warrior of Anarchy · Post by **Warrior of Anarchy** » Sat Oct 18, 2008 9:45 am

Looks good as it is to me but if you outline it it will look even better