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FIREST0RM000
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Post by FIREST0RM000 »

the stretched sections look alright covered with aegis, but the front claws need some work. seem way to stretched.

the color is kind of ugly, but in a way that makes it more menacing, and makes me want to shoot it. action shot please.
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Master Chief wrote:If you're aiming for that putrid flesh colour then I think you've hit a bullseye on that. Eww. :?
I dunno, it could do with some red around the edges and maybe a dash of yellow here or there... :mrgreen:
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Post by Spoot Knight »

It makes me think of Vajra.
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Anty
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Post by Anty »

im working on a new ship, the artemis. I am pretty content about the main body but I just can't find any fitting wings or sidepods for the middle section
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I tried this style wings, but it keeps on getting very messy

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Post by Lizzie »

The stretching on those Missile turrets looks bad. Otherwise the ship is decent. I think the wings are a bit too ..... fat though.

Also try using two different greys. A lighter and a darker Grey.
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Anty
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Post by Anty »

Lizzie wrote:The stretching on those Missile turrets looks bad. Otherwise the ship is decent. I think the wings are a bit too ..... fat though.

Also try using two different greys. A lighter and a darker Grey.
actually there are 2 shades. I think I will increase the contrast a bit
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Post by Master Chief »

Too messy, section usage-wise. I'd recommend you avoid placing sections just to fill up whatever gaps there may be or to give the ship a definite outline. Right now I find the wings rather atrociously done-up. Perhaps a second revision could eliminate some of the problems this version is showing currently.
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Anty
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Post by Anty »

Master Chief wrote:Too messy, section usage-wise. I'd recommend you avoid placing sections just to fill up whatever gaps there may be or to give the ship a definite outline. Right now I find the wings rather atrociously done-up. Perhaps a second revision could eliminate some of the problems this version is showing currently.


the main body too messy? I don't see where.

I already commented on the wings, I scrapped them
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Post by Master Chief »

Anty wrote:the main body too messy? I don't see where.
Main body isn't really much of a concern. More the wings. Though if you've scrapped them then that's a definite improvement.
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Anty
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Post by Anty »

im working on a new ship, I am trying something different this time. I have finished the inner piece but the other sections are only the basic layout

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and yes I WILL change the colours
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Post by SHAD0Wdump »

Don't you dare call it the battle axe. :wink:

The edges are a bit rough looking.
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