First 3 ships. want criticism!

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Gazarus
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First 3 ships. want criticism!

Post by Gazarus »

First of all hi everyone and this is my first ship i made its not coloured yet so its still green. and i want critisiiscm be harsh id rather it be harsh and helpful than kind and not so here it is.

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so Criticism please!
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Post by Ukomalkaizio »

The shape's ok, but the parts look a bit jumbled.
A bit of part repetition is fine, as long as the ship as a whole looks good.

Changing the default ship colors to something else would be cool, too.
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Post by Lizzie »

Not bad. Needs color.
And please save to a .PNG format from now on, more crisp, less blurry.
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Post by Gazarus »

Working on colouring it now and ooops forget abotu saving to png sowwy :(
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Post by Saint Jamez911 »

For a basic ship it looks very nice. Color would be nice. (noticed you where doing so) and for a first ship it is pretty good. Cluttering peices isn't good. Try not to use "fillers" (added just to fill in holes and gapes)
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Post by DeathsHand »

Heh, not too bad. Rearrange a few pieces, add some color, and you have a pretty nice ship there :D
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Post by Gazarus »

I see waht you mean by cluttering i intended them to be armr but i suppose buffing the hp of the other armr plates would make it look better. (deflectors are cheating :p)
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Post by Saint Jamez911 »

Youknow you can change the amount of time the deflectors stay on, and change the energy intake for them to.
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Post by Gazarus »

yeh but still think there cheating and i prefer armour ships anyways.

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couldnt get the colour to work in the editor colour may not be that good matched as im still getting used to how the coulouring parts worked, will start work on a less cluttered one in the meanwhile.
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Post by LordGarcia »

The shape is really cool and I like that colouring you did. I would change some weapons on the sides. the Pd and the beamer could be placed better on the corresponding pieces.
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Post by Gazarus »

Will Keep that in mind thanks for the criticism i expected it to be harsher :D (still getting used to the colour changer its weird :P)
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Post by Exethalion »

LordGarcia wrote:the Pd and the beamer could be placed better on the corresponding pieces.
Harsher version, just for Gazarus:

Your placement of pd and beamers is absolutely shite, you absolute dumbass. Go and do it again before I shoot you and rip various parts of your body apart.

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Post by Gazarus »

Now im Scared :P any suggestions on where to put the pd and beamer? bemaers are mainly side but have some frontal coverage.
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Post by Saint Jamez911 »

I like the coloring execpt the yellow one the rear towards the middle, it throws it all off.
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3rd ship

Post by Gazarus »

That ones probly because i accidently changed it to yellow it should be oranged :P
Working on a less cluttered version and hopefully more balanced.

Latest ragnaros (top one) and a unamed ship below

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Made this one to

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used less parts than the first so hopefully it should look less cluttered to.
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