A WIP comments criticisms compliments
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A WIP comments criticisms compliments
had a little experiment with asymmetry and TSA sections
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Re: A WIP comments criticisms compliments
... I want to see that first one with less PITCH BLACK, please.

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Re: A WIP comments criticisms compliments
No no, don't you see Lizzie!? It's a stealth ship, and the PITCH BLACKNESS is so it can be sneaky and invisible! That makes it okay!Lizzie wrote:... I want to see that first one with less PITCH BLACK, please.

Here's a hint, Preacher: No it doesn't. It just makes it look boring and dark and ugly. Make the dark bits less dark or otherwise remove the big bright orange patches that render the entire stealth premise completely and utterly worthless. It looks like there might actually be a ship worth seeing under all that darkness, and you're not doing yourself any favours my making it so hard to fucking see.
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Re: A WIP comments criticisms compliments
yeah sorry i reset my monitor to watch a movie it was meant to be dark but not pitch black
heres a recoloured version so you can actually see the ship 


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Re: A WIP comments criticisms compliments
The shading seems kinda weird. See the sections that makes up the outer hull at the front half of the ship, just behind and above/below the sections furthest to the right? The dark grey you used doesn't seem right
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