Imaillusion wrote:I actually don't mind that big yellow ship, although it does has a few problems, most of which have already been stated. For a start, you should lengthen the front, pointy part of of the ship so that it is about twice as long as the rest of the ship. Then, bring the wings in a bit and sweep them back a bit more. Also, sweep back the blue sections on the front as well, so they're almost parallel with the ends of the wings. Finally, lengthen the ends of those wings, so that the overall shape of the ship is more streamlined
Except these are all subjective opinions. I personally think the ship is more or less fine as it is. It's not how
I'd make a ship, but the things I'd change on it aren't flaws, they'd just alterations I'd make to suit my style. Technically speaking, there is absolutely nothing wrong with it.
The only real criticism anyone's been able to offer is "I don't like the colour scheme" and "I don't like the shape", but they're personal opinions. As a ship, it's pretty much solid. The technique is great. And I really dig the Nightmare. Only thing I'd really change with that is maybe make some of the doodads blend with the hull a little more, since some of them look like they were just kinda drawn on in MS Paint.
EDIT: Afterthought, how in the hell did you motherfuckers become more elitist and pickier than I am when you fuckers can't even make ships half as good? Jesus Christ. I mean, I get offering constructive criticism, but 90% of this shit is just "whaaa it isn't a shape I like so I'll pick on that even though there's really nothing wrong with the construction of the ship itself". Fuck.
Second EDIT: This first edit has already lead to a shitstorm which got split to
here, there's no need for another, please.