Light Destroyer

Veronw · Post by **Veronw** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:18 am

Hi all,

Little ship I made, figured I would see what comments I could get for it.

edit: sorry for the extra white space on the image, it won't let me crop it

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:23 am

Looks pretty cool. Some of the green looks choppy but I'd say the ship is pretty good.

Kiltric · Post by **Kiltric** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 4:49 am

I like it. I would almost say the green is a little too strong, but that concerns me less than what you've done well. The center pod looks rather like a helmet, and makes it very menacing. It makes me think of some incarnation of a Cylon ship

Edit: Thank you droid for correcting my typographical idiocy.

For all future reference, Cylon ship.....

Ninteen45 · Post by **Ninteen45** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 5:28 am

I can honestly only see one place to add a weapon. however it looks interesting, I'd like to see more!

Post by **Kaelis** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 6:01 am

Kiltric wrote:It makes me think of some incarnation of a Ceylon ship.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Ceylon ...?

Droid · Post by **Droid** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 6:49 am

Maybe he meant Cylon?

Swamp Fox · Post by **Swamp Fox** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 8:34 am

Kiltric wrote:For all future reference, Cylon ship..... http://www.alfredsmind.ca/intel/evraidersc3.jpg

Or... http://www.universeguide.com/Pictures/CylonFighter.jpg Can't forget the classics, now can we?
But in all seriousness, it's a decent small ship. I don't think the green integrates as well as it could, but other than that I don't have any serious complaints.

Veronw · Post by **Veronw** » Mon Oct 05, 2009 2:32 pm

any complaints or suggestions at all would aid greatly in improving my ship, so please, list even the tinest!

Kiltric · Post by **Kiltric** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 1:34 am

even the tiniest? okay, tone down the saturation on the green color so it doesn't keep stabbing our eyes.
Beyond that, I'd just say, start working on more ships in this style.

Corporal Jomn · Post by **Corporal Jomn** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 4:53 am

Either that, or lighten the grey up. I second that notion Kiltrc.

25000st · Post by **25000st** » Tue Oct 06, 2009 6:58 am

Alright, tiniest details. The angles of the green outline in the front half of the ship don't match the gray section above. Some of the green in the back is underneath the gray section. You may want to move it a bit out.