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Also, the blue turret looks out of place. Changing its colour to a light grey, like the turret in front, would suit it better

...I don't think the weapons you edited really changed what is wrong with the ship. The sprites you took from the other game look fuzzy and they don't work well with the other sections. Those sections themselves are by default waaaaaay too dark (Read: I changed the colour of the sections on your shi...

Well, the first ship lacks shading, I can see that there are some differences between the colours of those blue sections. Thing is, they are so subtle that most people won't even notice, and so the whole ship comes out looking flat. And I don't know whether it's just the settings on my monitor, but ...

The overall shape of all four ships will improve if the front end of the ships tapered down to a point, rather being really blocky and flat. And i agree with Baigent, in that there are parts on the last two ships where the sections get really narrow, it makes those points look really fragile

...yeah, it's not as good as you think. To point out the main problems, you've used the sections in such a way that they fit really badly with each other. The shading is not consistent, like how there are the very dark sections around the middle, it looks out of place. Some of the turrets (the missi...

Most of the tube-like sections, and the front area, are too bright, darken them so that they're about the same shade as the engines. The sections at the front itself also look like they've been stuck on rather arkwardly.

The shape for me is just a tad...round? There's nothing wrong with a round ship :? What bugs me though is that those sections covering those turrets at the sides look out of place, they're kinda blocky. And what's more is that if those sections were removed, the resulting shape doen't look half bad...

...Its not looking really good at the moment, I'm afraid. Apart from the fact that your only using stock sections, it also looks really cluttered and messy, and I doubt you really planned how the ship would look. You're probaly better off trying to build something a bit smaller so you get more exper...

Gonna have to act the bad guy here and say that these ships need some serious work done on them. Particularly the first one, it is - as you say - horribly shaded, the sections are placed badly, etc. The second ship is an improvment, you just need to shade it a bit more and shift some of the sections...

...hate to break it to you, but these ships aren't as good as you think. Most of the sections don't really fit together well, there are a couple of parenting errors that need to be addresed, and the general shape and design of your ships themselves are rather lacking in quality. Back to the drawing ...

...If you didn't understand what the people before me have said, I'll dumb it down for you... What you have shown us is NOT acceptable by our current standards. Maybe they were when the first versions of BSF came out, but not anymore. If, and this is what you should have done in the first place, you...

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Meh, so bored i'll join. IC name : Hector Kistashi Back story : Hector Kistashi entered the political system at a young age, in honor of his father who was killed by his rivals. Naturally gifted, Hector quickly expanded his influence, becoming well known as a ruthless poltical leader. Despite the so...

Don't mix SWA-sprites with stock sections. In your case, revert some of your turrets back to their original sprites.