Wyrdysm Games

I study Star Wars a little, and I think the first one looks better. Also, the pieces that are blue should be either yellow or light orange, just to get you started.

You're welcome for the advise, and be sure to ask me if you want any more, I'd be happy to share my ideas.

Statistics heavily edited for the factions, tell me what you think.

I think you time line is a little bit too spread out. It seems unlikely that a race would invent a spaceship at least 9,997,500 years before the Terrans. Try showing what home planet they started on, the civilizations they first met, their first leader, wars etc. Interesting description of the speci...

The Kronius Empire was an ally of the Galactic Infinite Empire. Having a totalitarian government like the Galactic Infinite Empire, the Kronius Empire eventually fell due to rebellions caused by Free Beings Alliance movements with the empire.

Note: I will update the statistics of this faction later.

My bad about the "x" key, I'll update my statistics with it so that they are neater. I was referring to the multiplication key on desktop computers.

The Free Beings Alliance is a collection of rebels and dissidents opposed to large imperialistic empires. It's main goal is to cause the dissolving of the Universe Empire, though it's trying to do the same to other empires. The Free Beings Alliance was instrumental in the fall of many large empires,...

That's a good summary, I like how you gave a time line. Perhaps I should put one in my empire's summary.

The Universe Empire is one of the oldest and most powerful civilizations in the known universe, with an empire that spreads across thousands of galaxies. With nonillions of soldiers and sextillions of ships, the empire has a huge intimidation factor over any opponent. It's emperor, Roanis Quintonius...