Wyrdysm Games

@TSA. Yay! You're back. To answer your question it's not what your ships look like. I wrote an ATTEMPT to copy SWA. Not SWA's ship. The general idea of the ship looks kinda like the ships in your thread. The detail and section usage and coloring and so on and so forth I did is no match for your skill.

What does everyone else think?

A new ship guys. All comments welcome. I get a cluttered feeling from this ship.



For the lulz, an attempt to copy SWA.
http://filesmelt.com/dl/SMscreen0502.png

I actually have to say thats a step down from your usual work. The ship seems to get worse as you move away from the center. There is also a bit of clutter.

So far this project has been discouraging. Theres something about the middle that bothers me. All help is welcome.

Looks like it has some potential. Its not perfect at this point but theres something good about it.
Just work on your execution

Added some color to the nose.

No comments??


I fixed a few things. C&C Please??

A fighter. Not much else to say lol.

http://filesmelt.com/downloader/SMscreen047.png

Some sections look a bit stretched shrank but that transformation is awesome!

C&C GUYS!!!

Cool. Could you tone down the white? Its a bit eye searing.
Perhaps you could but smaller 50's between the hundreds. You're also gonna put numbers vertically too right?

C'mon guys. Constructive Criticism is needed.

I also would like to know if I should change the color scheme of the second ship.

Ed:new ship

How are these?