Wyrdysm Games

The glows aren't excessive on their own, but they call attention to the fact that the ship is all dull grey. With that much glow, I think the ship needs more color on the hull.

Overall very nice ships, even from this close. My only complaint would be that the twin beamer on the corvette seems a bit out of place. I think it's shrunk too much. Consider using a different weapon, or at least a different sprite.

Definitely interesting. Major points for novelty. I can't wait to see more with some refinement. No criticism that hasn't already been mentioned.

There's a big blue blob in the middle of your ship that sticks out like a very cold thumb. Try layering over/swapping out that square with something that looks like it's part of a three dimensional ship, and not a two dimensional pile of sprites.

King Tiger is much better, though the colors are still a little harsh, consider "greying" them down a bit. Panzer looks improved, but your section usage is still sloppy and haphazard, especially in the rear. You seem to have the idea of flow better in King Tiger, take a few notes from ther...

The Panzer overhaul is a big improvement on the original. That said, there are still a handful of things to work on. The first thing that comes to eye is that the yellow sections in the rear, and actually most of the sections were stuck on seemingly arbitrarily and look haphazard. There are also sev...

Kinda has a penisbrick feel to it, but as far as first ships go, this is at the upper end of the spectrum. I hope to see more.

Most good criticism has already been said, but I'll add that there are several depthing issues with your weapons and modules. At least check your work more thoroughly before you submit it.

very repetitive. fixed :) Cut down on some of the nukes and buff the stats, and please use something besides those giant squares to make up the body of your ship. A little variety in your color wouldn't hurt either. On the whole though, it's a decent ship, provided the monotony gets broken up. Coul...

Interesting design on the Eisenhower. I don't really like the open spaces down the middle. Not that they can't work, but something about them now just doesn't seem right. I think it's the that fore one is very smooth and the aft one has a great deal of jagged detail. Also, the main engines don't see...

The weapon placement doesn't seem right. They're stuck on everywhere there was a small gap to fit one, which is good for making them look integrated, but the firing angles seem illogical.

Thank you for your criticism, I honestly appreciate it. It is a work in progress though so I obviously will color it and as I said this is only about half the ship which is why its chopped off. Not sure what you mean about stretching though but I am going to swap a few sections out. The sections on...

On this latest ship... I assume with this being a work in progress that you'll unstretch the sections that look ugly and properly color it along with the glows (which look good, except maybe the fire in the rear). One thing though, the fact that you have three or four "layers" ending on th...

@ UER Free Lancer Colors need work. See how you have a grey brick at the front and a variety in the stern? Try evening that out a bit. Also, the right angles jutting out along the sides of the ship make it look sort of incomplete. Consider putting something underneath to make the overall outline loo...

This Randomness is awesome. My only criticism would be that the large wings in the front are a bit too large in proportion to the sections that connect them to the main body, or rather that those sections are too small, given the wings themselves are a good size in relation to the ship.