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by Warpman
Sat Jul 11, 2009 4:54 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Random acts of violence with shipmaker
Replies: 205
Views: 61142

The frontal "jaws" are a Fail relative to the Neat and Tidy look of the rest of the ship. Especially the Engines and the Gun Platforms.
Cut it off for the sake of the style.
by Warpman
Sat Jul 11, 2009 4:49 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Warbird variation
Replies: 5
Views: 1524

Deflectors, One-colour ships, Rotating Blasters are Fails. Sorry, but your ships need LOT of tweaks. First, try to use Different colour scheme. Toxic Green in Vast numbers is a fail. Secondly Cut down those deflectors. They look bad (unless you make their effects black colour) And as the last point ...
by Warpman
Sat Jul 11, 2009 4:45 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: AD's cunning concepts: Adelaide class on page 11.
Replies: 185
Views: 93880

The Epic ship is meant to make enemy shit bricks. Literally. (Until you show what it's worth on the battlefield it's impossible to say anything on that point) It is meant to be Big.(it is. OK.) It's supposed to be heavily armoured. (OK.) It's supposed to have the Style. (OK.) It's supposed to look l...
by Warpman
Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:43 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: United Established Systems Navy
Replies: 5
Views: 1497

The reactor part is slightly blurred...
The colour is nice and Melvinish.
The overall design is normal, yet you have mirroring errors(particle cannons)
Yes, Realism is nothing, but where are the Engines?
by Warpman
Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:40 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: AD's cunning concepts: Adelaide class on page 11.
Replies: 185
Views: 93880

Epic ship is all made just like a single structure. And here there is some sort of clash-the centre and forward looks solid and "fat", while the backside is mostly made from brittle-looking "thin" spines.
It needs to be either one or another.
by Warpman
Fri Jul 10, 2009 3:04 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: AD's cunning concepts: Adelaide class on page 11.
Replies: 185
Views: 93880

Well. It's big, mostly well-coloured and has almost no itches in design.
Neat. But not Epic enough. Something is missing.
by Warpman
Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:03 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Another ship, start of a fleet.
Replies: 34
Views: 4557

Nanobot attack? Could be a great Idea...
yet the AI is not that good and they'll go in a row.
by Warpman
Thu Jul 09, 2009 7:00 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Another ship, start of a fleet.
Replies: 34
Views: 4557

The fighter is a joke, right? Zoom-zoom, maybe?
Frigate looks best of all the other. Somewhat resembles Defender Fighter from HW1
by Warpman
Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:58 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Rose's ships, I'm new don't hurt me, please?
Replies: 9
Views: 1953

Not much colour.
Not that good design (Except for the Cherrymonster...)
many of the ships are horribly repetitive.
by Warpman
Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:56 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: The Confederacy of Free Systems + A WIP
Replies: 16
Views: 3009

Very impressive.
Actually it's the best stock-only ships I've seen lately.
I wonder what would come out If you use some other parts?
maybe a miracle will happen!
MOAR
by Warpman
Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:54 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Another ship, start of a fleet.
Replies: 34
Views: 4557

Huh. Glows in such amounts can be good for Fraxy, but then you need to have Bright ships.
The design is good, yet no details can be seen.
Brighter, please.
and yes, MOAR SHIPS
by Warpman
Thu Jul 09, 2009 6:49 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Concept Frigate
Replies: 11
Views: 2973

The blue is a bit too bright.(IMO)
Mirroring errors. 3 at least.

The design shows decent taste. The size is right-no overstretching.
There is nothing "too" in the ship. Good, yet slightly minimalistic.

Keep up. Maybe one day you'll bring everyone down with a whole fleet or some EPIC SHIP.
by Warpman
Tue Jul 07, 2009 5:40 pm
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: BlackMetalZivon's Ships
Replies: 46
Views: 9919

Brown and Yellow is not good. Try the classics- white-black, briht red\greed\orange..and try not to turn your ship into a part mess. Use different grades.
And the lines from aegises show that you don't use the F11 and F9 and simply make screenshots and cut them...
by Warpman
Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:05 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: BlackMetalZivon's Ships
Replies: 46
Views: 9919

Ouch..colour clash. Such colour shcemes can work with animeish huge robots or something like that...but not ships.

Not-that-good design. Try loading Custom parts. this way you'll get more variety.
by Warpman
Tue Jul 07, 2009 9:02 am
Forum: Ship Archive
Topic: Verdian Stellar Defense Force
Replies: 17
Views: 4974

Big.
Colours are nice.
Glows are at their places.
No section spam.
No effect spam.

Overall:Epic.