Back with a few new Ships

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LitanyofFury
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Back with a few new Ships

Post by LitanyofFury »

Just a few ships I threw together while sitting here waiting for my plane to leave.

C&C welcome!


Akaron-Class Missile Destroyer

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Imperion-Class Assault Cruiser

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Ravager-Class Beam Destroyer

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Nomad-Class Fire Support Ship

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Enforcer-Class Patrol Destroyer

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Echelon-Class Command Battleship

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There ya go! Give me all your thoughts and feedback on the new vessels
25000st
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Post by 25000st »

I actually like the shape of the ships. There's a few problems i'll list.

The circular section on the Nomad-Class Fire Support Ship looks out of place
I don't like that color scheme. The blue is too dark and if it were lighter, it would look like Melv's colors.
The ships seem cluttered and the weapons look spammed.
LitanyofFury
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Post by LitanyofFury »

yea the last two and the nomad I admit are alittle spammed and awkward but im pretty happy with the way the others turned out. thanks for the advice, i'll have to take them back into shipbuilder and fix'm up
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Post by guilee186 »

Not bad, Not bad at all.

As mentioned above, in the post, it is a little bit too spammy, but I like the general shape and how the weapons are shaping up. The bubbleshield is decent, though I'd suggest giving it a grayer colour instead of teal.
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Post by bien4500 »

Nice ships you got there! But the circular section on the Nomad looks out of place, like 25000 said.

And do I see Confederate Colors on the Echelon?
LitanyofFury
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Post by LitanyofFury »

yea they need alittle tweaking, but i don't think they're too bad to be made in an airport lol
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Post by MelvinVm »

A bit less usage of detailed sections will do it, most of them look exposed.
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Post by Danny420Dale »

That's pretty damn spectacular for an 'airport build' The shapes and weapons are great, as is the depth you gave each ship with the grayscales on the hulls.

However, the colors are a bit naff in my opinion. Dark blue and bright red-orange didn't work for the Denver Broncos, and it's not working for these ships, especially with the BRIGHT WHITE guns and "Turrquazz" shields. I'm also wondering what's going on with the Echelon's bowsprits.
MelvinVm wrote:A bit less usage of detailed sections will do it, most of them look exposed.
I don't see a problem with 'exposed' or fragile-looking hull sections if the ship has shields, like these do. Otherwise, slap on some ARMOR with RIVETS. :D
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Post by jwa8402 »

The Akaron is the epitome of a battleship to me. It just looks tough in a warhammerish way. The Eschlon is also awesome but could be beefed up slightly on the nose.
LitanyofFury
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Post by LitanyofFury »

haha thanks thats where i kinda drew my inspiration for the Acharon, and as for the Echelon, there are aegis that protect the forward section for now, ill have to take a second look at it, thanks for the comments though
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